boardsintermediateGirl doodle
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drawn in 2 hours 48 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
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iconinatyrb
Addict
7 versions
1 hour 8 min
iconHakkai
Youkai
22 min
iconReich
Dabbler
1 hour 17 min
inatyrb (Jun 6, 2005)
Ok, I've been making similar doodle in school lately, and well, I decided to post this one to see what everyone thinks. C&C would be great! I have not done the "lineart" yet, but before I do I would like to know what everyone else thinks. ^^ Thanks a ton!!
inatyrb (Jun 6, 2005)
drawn in 16 min
Noremac (Jun 6, 2005)
... eyes are a bit close, ears are a smidge too high... neck is a smidge thick... cheeks are puffy... theres my 2 cents
inatyrb (Jun 6, 2005)
Yup.. ok.. I see it.. When i draw it and look at it it looks fine. When I submit.. it doesnt look nearly as good. Ok.. ears.. i see... Neck i see what I can do... need to make neck longer too... eyes are close.. damn... and I have to do something with the hair.. anyone else? I really enjoy this!! ^^
Juni_gatsu (edited Jun 6, 2005)
Yeah, the ears are a bit high, on most people the tops of your ears are only a little higher that your eyebrows. I like her cheeks and eyes though, they giver her cute look ^.^.
Now...go color my lineart! *beats inatyrb with a rubber chicken*
inatyrb (Jun 6, 2005)
oh, ok! Thanks so much Lyrica! Hehe...
inatyrb (Jun 6, 2005)
drawn in 5 min
ok.. fixing the problem.. somethings might still be wrong.. tell me what you think...
inatyrb (Jun 6, 2005)
drawn in 6 min
more revision.. ok!! I seriously think i'm ready.. Ok.. Any suggestions AT ALL before I lineart this?

Oh, and Alec has asked to color this, so yeah. Awesome.

Thanks!
inatyrb (Jun 7, 2005)
drawn in 11 min
damnit.. i was gonna do lineart.. but noo... does anyone wanna do the lineart? I would love for something help!
inatyrb (Jun 16, 2005)
drawn in 21 min
This lineart can really blow my balls for all I care. I am having the hardest time with it, and I'm about to have someone else do it. Sigh... My art talent is diminishing.... :'(
inatyrb (Jun 16, 2005)
drawn in 1 min
Erasing the lineart, because Hakkai is doing it. ^^
Hakkai (Jun 17, 2005)
drawn in 22 min
Fixed the lineart up for you. =3
Hope this was what you wanted.
inatyrb (Jun 17, 2005)
Thank you Hakkai!! It looks great! I'm so happy that you were able to do it. You even made it look better! Thank you again!
Reich (Jun 17, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 17 min
hehe ^^, ok im done, i think i did fairly good on the coloring ^^ hope you like it!
inatyrb (Jun 17, 2005)
drawn in 5 min
Ok, time to call this finished!
Thank you everyone!
Xodiak (Jun 17, 2005)
She looks beautiful. Great work! <:D
|XOD|
Reich (edited Jun 17, 2005)
Hehe... I love drawing.. I have been practicig faces for awhile now. I really couldn't do the lineart though, so as you see i had someone else do it for me. Lol... dunno why, but i just couldn't get the smooth lines. But thats ok. Anyways.. I think that in the future I will be doing more of these incase anyone would like to join! ^^ I love comments
~Brytani
Kenshin (Jun 17, 2005)
This is pretty well drawn. The neck looks a tad off, though.
I like the eyes. And the hair color =D
inatyrb (edited Jun 19, 2005)
^^, something I have noticed in my drawings is my inability to draw necks the right size. Thank you for your feedback, I greatly appreciate it!!
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