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Zack (May 2, 2005) — edit

I was just laying down basic shapes in pencil stuff using my tablet for the second time ever (first was that apartment photo) and suddenly a little shading here and there and it started looking really cool on its own.

edit: Thanks for the crits! I tried to address your concerns and changed a couple other things that were bugging me, what do you think? Was I successful? How well does the composition work now on the whole?

Zack (May 2, 2005)
drawn in 34 min

DeadlyBlondeArcher (edited May 2, 2005)

I think it's pretty cool, but if you add some structure in the background on the horizon, it will be better. The composition doesn't work right now because your eye goes to the blank area back there. (maybe sketch the road disappearing over the second hill you have there, leading your eye to something... just trees, or ... anything will work.)

WhoopsieDaisy (May 2, 2005)

i think this is great because of the sketchy pencil lines...his unibrow is also great because it's cute...i agree with dba though the the blank spot is a distraction...so i think it's not great because the background needs more work...

overall that's two greats and one not great...the greats have it :p

Zack (May 2, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 1 min

spent a lot of time talking to someone who dropped by, hopefully not overworked here

Zack (May 2, 2005)
drawn in 12 min

no more! no more!

WhoopsieDaisy (May 2, 2005)

the bent horsey leg is muchly better...the helmet looks wonderful cleaned up like that...the lake reflection was a very nice touch...nice job

Caddris (May 2, 2005)

I love it! Very fantasy-esque. ^__^ I really like the shading on the breast plate.

davincipoppalag (May 2, 2005)

This will be fun to watch ! It's a good looking scene already.

TaCO (May 3, 2005)

O.O Great pic so far!!!!

DeadlyBlondeArcher (May 3, 2005)

I just now remembered to come back and see what you did with this... what you did in the background with the fading road and the hills and the little castle.. eggZACKtly what I was thinking. :) I love the way it so closely emulates a pencil sketch.