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Nanibunny (Apr 26, 2003)
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Equus (edited Apr 26, 2003)

Pretty, but I think you went a bit heavy on the outline around her head... And the eyes look a bit wierd to me...

forgotten-memory (edited Apr 26, 2003)

I'll agree with Equus, but you also might want to work a little bit more on defining the feathers in the wings...at first I thought they were scales on mountain.

Mnemosyne (edited Apr 27, 2003)

I'm sure once it's coloured, the wings will no longer look like scales on a mountain. *laugh* the line around the head is definately too dark though, and something to think about: if she's facing the front, we wouldn't really see a wedge nose, now would we?

Nanibunny (Apr 27, 2003)
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Nanibunny (edited Apr 27, 2003)

um. . well she wasnt supposed to be facing the front. . .shes sort of looking at something on the left. . .