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KRIDDY (Apr 23, 2003)
I drew this same girl last night in a teaser poster for my new strip uber hotti. I guess she looks *okay*..... I couldn't figure out how to put the hips in a place to make her look bent over. In this "edition", so to speak, i tried to shine the drool up but it wouldn't. What do you think i could do about those hips?

PS the title isn't her its what she's looking at...

also i was just messing around and my mom made me get off the phone line so there
KRIDDY (Apr 23, 2003)
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raenboe (edited Apr 23, 2003)
The backside kinda doesn't look like it is attached to her. Other than that, very cute! I suggest you outline the backside and such in black with 1 px.
SandyDexHamtaro (edited Apr 23, 2003)
Um...she looks...distorted.>__<
Mnemosyne (edited Apr 23, 2003)
You should put her in a dress. that way the front and back will match up more. And also: Her front is directly towards the . . . front, I guess, but her back is at an angle, so if you had made her front at an angle it would prolly looks better too.
KRIDDY (edited Apr 24, 2003)
Yes, I see. Thank you much, guys. I'll fix her up eventually :)
darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)
kind of crude and not well done..... for one, her breasts should be a tad bit smaller.... then her torso should be moved more to the left of the screen... if you can do so! then the skin should have a skin color to it, and not white with a pink blush... the blush would fit much better then.... and last, the hair needs more work... alot more....
KRIDDY (edited Apr 27, 2003)
bug off darkk
i've heard enough of your rude comments
we have feelings too, ya know
and lay off of that ten-year-old angeleyes for god's sake
>:(
Anyone who agrees plz post
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