the hair is too high, and so are the eyes. using a mouse a or a tabby? the shading is nice, but not realistic. i think you should think a bit more on what direction the lighting is coming from... generally lighting starts to slop down around the nose also. also, the shading on the hair is waaaaaaay off... and not every clump of hair has its own shadow. and the shadows that do come down from the hair are going in all directions... work on the mechanics of your shading.
that's called criticism, hun. You have to incorpriate it into your next drawing which will make it better if you pay attention. You can't expect everyone to love your drawings if you can't take a little helpful criticism.
Your eye style is... Um... Creepy... Remember that usually, the whites of the eyes are not outlined in a dark color, if outlined at all, and the colored part of the eye, the iris, is usually bigger, and the pupil, or dark centre of the eye is about the size of the irises in the pic so far.
Mmkay? Remember that. ^_^
Belleza, Forgotten, I find that if you're going to critique, you should add some positive comments, like how the use of color compliments the image, add to the positive and "happy" atmosphere, and how the subjects of the image are well juxtaposed (nice layout). Not to mention how the central figure is nicly framed by the rest of the image.
It's good to know what you're doing wrong, but you have to know what you're doing right or it's all pointless, really.
My two cents. Blah, what do I know.
[EDIT] Also if you're draing eyes, set the eyelid just on top of the pupil. That way, they don't look like they're on a sugar binge. The distance from the inner corona to the outter corona should equal the diameter of the pupil. Adjust for contracion.
i said i like how he does shading. I don't like the shading mechanics, but the shading itself is ok. i actually refrained a lot on the criticism; i could've said a lot more
FUCK THAT IS DISTURBED!! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THEM!! SORRY!! BUT IT SUCKS!! well, you could fix it by giving them FRIGGIN EYEBROWS!!! GRRR!! SORRY MARCELL IF YOU ARE READING THIS!@!!! XO
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*glomps them ^O^*
Mmkay? Remember that. ^_^
It's good to know what you're doing wrong, but you have to know what you're doing right or it's all pointless, really.
My two cents. Blah, what do I know.
[EDIT] Also if you're draing eyes, set the eyelid just on top of the pupil. That way, they don't look like they're on a sugar binge. The distance from the inner corona to the outter corona should equal the diameter of the pupil. Adjust for contracion.
while the heads are a little big...I think the color scheme is way cute....like they have matching outfits. xD
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