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Jack_Fox (Oct 14, 2004)
Okay...don't mark this hidden Marcello plz...I want to get some feedback...I have a real hard time with female anatomy soooo...any tips? Peace, Jack
PS: anyone who wants to collab a little on this memo meh.
Jack_Fox (Oct 14, 2004)
drawn in 12 min
Hakkai (Oct 15, 2004)
Hmnnn.. I guess the left shoulder is a bit too far. Brood shoulders = men. Yeeaaah, thats all I could tell you for now..
concannon (Oct 16, 2004)
Yes to the thing about the shoulders, and it looks like instead of boobs, her ribs just stick out. Try drawing a rought outline of her torso, before adding breasts.
SanzoGirl (Oct 17, 2004)
at least you have the power to aculy make GOOD drawings unlike meh ;__; my drawings suck
Jack_Fox (Oct 17, 2004)
drawn in 8 min
Hakkai (Oct 27, 2004)
drawn in 16 min
Fixed a few proportions for you. n__n;

Argh, I see a mistake I made. The arm is longer than it's supposed to be. The elbow's too low and wtc. I think you can fix that up yourself, nh?
squee (Nov 26, 2004)
drawn in 44 min
?__? uh.. gothic chick?? well, the clothes gave her more form..and i gave her a different hairstyle. and man.. her eyes were missing.. and her face.. added that too. ^__^;;

Jack_Fox (Nov 26, 2004)
Very nice squee. Only problem is that she's not buxom enough to be the girl I was drawing. I do like it tho! Very trig...sadly it looks nothing like the original; just goes to show how much I suxxorz...
squee (edited Nov 26, 2004)
buxom..? *ish braindead today*

edit: thanks.. >__>;;
Jack_Fox (Nov 26, 2004)
Buxom means "well rounded"in the sehxah sortah way.
squee (Nov 26, 2004)
oh... *thinks*..
Jack_Fox (Nov 26, 2004)
Teh boobzors need to be biggah
squee (Nov 26, 2004)
yes master...
squee (Nov 26, 2004)
drawn in 5 min
there bigger boobs..
Jack_Fox (Nov 28, 2004)
That's more like it...thank you
Childlike_Vampire (Dec 3, 2004)
The littler boobs looked better, especially since she has no hips :P. Great drawing tho! :D
Jack_Fox (Dec 3, 2004)
Still about 200 kb left for ediing if you'd like to fix that mistake C.Vamp...Otherwise I'll get on it as soon as I can...want to...feel like it...probably never...
squee (Dec 18, 2004)
there's girls like that.. start another girl figure and I can make her a slut for yas XD
Jack_Fox (Dec 29, 2004)
This was supposed to be someone that I know...completely different from her in almost every way though...Ye the boobehs are a tad and the big side *cough*HUGE*cough*. But hey, whatever.
Childlike_Vampire (Dec 29, 2004)
lol I don't need to fix it, I've got v.4 to look at if I want to, lol. :D
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