You know its true. Not to be mean or anything, but theres always room for improvement! n__n; Even for me. Anyways, the coloring was a bit sloopy. You can see that some of the coloring is outside the lines (i.e. outside the collar of his jacket and his hair). I see some sort of shading, but not alot of it.. Not only that, the lines are a bit jagged and.. his right arm is too short. His shoulders are a bit too big too. Tthe rest of it looks fine in my eyes. (Besides the background needing some details.)
I'm very interested in this picture, and sorta want to help it like Sephiroth54321 wants to. Memo me or him if we can help, okay?
well it was my firt time using Oekaki Shi-Painter and i only did the coloring but i know the backround suxs and i got out of the lines alil bit i guess if you guys wanna help u can.....exept u'll have to get Sutafaini to unlock u
Mmh.. Didn't do so well on the background. Missed a few spots. >_>; Anyways. I fixed up the lineart (Proportions and what not), cleaned up the coloring (included shading), and fixed up the background. I hope this wasn't too much.. If you want your picture the way it was before, just delete the 2nd, 3rd, and 5 layer. u__u; As simple as that.
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I'm very interested in this picture, and sorta want to help it like Sephiroth54321 wants to. Memo me or him if we can help, okay?
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