It kinda looks like the shoulder is slumped forward just a tad too much forward if anything.Btw, the left shoulder looks like it goes from narrow back into proportion down to the elbow.And if you want to keep the right arm up that far up in front, might have to pull his left shoulder back further.
I know its only a character sketch..and its very good. Only he seems so stiff..and his boots are a little akward to look at..(although that might just be the style, sorry if it is) The facial area is a little funny.. Overall it is very cool, like the shoulder pads and the lines for the katana are well done.
I appreciate the comments. Yeah, the boots are kind of klunky on purpose. Kind of gave up after a dozen or so modifications on that arm. Hopefully it'll look better shaded.
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Lol nice job. I like this character. The background is nice, simple and nice.