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tappie_chan (Apr 4, 2004)
wanted to see if i could do it...the japanese says "beneath the cherry blossoms...the beautiful woman awaits her lover" so yeah...the ellipse tool was giving me a LOT of trouble, so i'm not gonna do designs on the kimono. we'll just say that the designs are at the bottom. so waddya think?
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i dunno if i'm gonna add anything on the kimono...
the only thing that bugs me are the lines of the kimono which are not clean enough (uhh, i sound severe...the pic is really nice though)
idd, okiyo-è has had alot of influence on european art...way more than we tend to think! (ever wonder why van gogh's are so wanted in japan)
And a smaller issue, but still valid criticism I think is the sketchyness of the lines on the kimono, some of them are pretty rough. For instance, look at the top of the image, then look at the bottom kimono part, and it feels almost as if the part was finished and the bottom was left as a sketch (although obviously this might be the case since you might've added the pattern to the kimono).
So, other than those small criticisms I think you've done a wonderful job. Also the background paper seems to me much like rice paper mounted on a wallscroll of some sort and aged quite well.
on the characters, I think the proportions is not so much a problem as the 'font.' it looks like what you might read printed in a newspaper, rather than calligraphy style. example example search
as for the elipse tool, dunno what's up with that, what exactly was the problem?