Lineart's looking good so far, and I like the how you did the baby and the baby's hand with the inner lines showing that the hand is pressed up to a window-nice touch there.Coloring also looks nice and tell me when you finish the entire thing so I can see it then too^^.Good job>v<.

Coming along nicely^^.Umm, I have to say that you might want to at least thin-up the black window lines.It kinda throws you off in wondering if that's the rain or the window.If you want realistic windows, you can kinda blur the outside with really light whites.But I really like the pool in the back^^.That's a nice way to show that it is raining with the rain hitting the top of the water.Like dixie said, can't wait to see it done :).

Got some nice curtains now, I see^^.Um, about the ripples, I think they could be more definite.I think right now, I can barely make them out so you might want to make it more visible first, and go from there.Improvements being added are helping with every revision^^.Looks very nice.

Stupid computer.....I did submit a comment after version 6, but somehow didn't post><....well, anyways I said that you did a great job taking my advice in this^^.I like all the details you added that some people might've missed when drawing this picture such as the hand marks on the window, the rain drops rolling down the sides of the window, the ripples in the water from the rain hitting the water, etc.I have to say you did a great job overall^^.Can't wait to see what you come up with next^^.