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YukiEiriSan (Feb 5, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 35 min

ReiClone (Feb 5, 2004)

I think either the nose is too low or the forehead's too flat, or both. I like the eye, though.

YukiEiriSan (Feb 6, 2004)
drawn in 8 min

Still not done.. Just did a quick revise of the nose and forehead.. I think it looks a lot better now... But I still need to improve it. Any suggestions?

YukiEiriSan (Feb 6, 2004)
drawn in 5 min

I uess this is as finished as its going to get unless anyone has any suggestions for me.. If you do tell me and I'll revise again.. I really want to improve but I can't if you don't tell me what you think!

Pkingsora (Feb 6, 2004)

This is great XD i love the colours.. hehehe

ReiClone (Feb 6, 2004)

Well, when you moved the nose up, you should have moved the mouth up, too. But really, there's nothing else wrong with the picture. Haha, I'm a little afraid to give out constructive criticism because I've been hated by many little kids in oekakis because they couldn't take it, even with a ton of praise added on to it.

dothacker (edited Feb 9, 2004)

lol! this looks a lot like Ryuichi! :D
... or Shuichi.. yeah, Shuichi. ^_____________^

rikurules (Feb 28, 2004)

this kind of looks like Sora from Kingdom Hearts... he does talkt to much

Noremac (Feb 28, 2004)

this looks like me.... who are you?