2draw.net - boards - Beginner - You know, it is extreamly hard to sell lemonade in the winter..

Shuichi-chan (Dec 12, 2003)
drawn in 1 hour 6 min

mazi (Dec 13, 2003)

nice but could've used a smaller canvas.

Shuichi-chan (Dec 13, 2003)

I know...I thought it was gonna be bigger...

marcello (Dec 13, 2003)

I'd suggest getting rid of that crappy background (you didn't even make it, using the texture tool looks bad with such a repetitive pattern), perhaps extending the rest of the figure and/or moving him up for a full-body pic. then if you want you can add a simple but defined background (some setting, such as a school).
there are a number of ways to make up for too much border.

Hotaru-chan (Dec 13, 2003)

It's soo cute!! *glomps the kitty* I like the eye a lot!! >__O

Shuichi-chan (Dec 13, 2003)
drawn in 56 min

Happy marcello? Hahaha he was trying to sell lemonade so that he could get all of his friends little presents, and then it snowed, so he sits here fruitlessly trying to sell his lemonade....poor guy...

marcello (Dec 13, 2003)

haha that's great. glad you decided to work on it more

Ameraq (Dec 13, 2003)

Personally, i like both of them. heheh, poor neko boy. *hugs him* i'll buy some lemonade!
great job shuichi-chan! nice nice.

Maiko (Dec 14, 2003)

Kyaaaah >< this is so cute
*glomps teh kitty boi*
tee hee, poor fhing ^^

Neko (Dec 14, 2003)

Don't know if lemonade will sell during winter.

The lineart of the character looks a lot better than the background or the box he's leaning on. Objects are hard to draw~.