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shalalaheartattack (Aug 22, 2006)

This is nice. I have just one quick criticism - The hair I think, would look better if you made a base of solid colour with a wider brush and then added highlights with a narrow one, rather than making the whole head of hair with a narrow brush. But overall, I like it. Lovely, for a first attempt.

MistressSoba (Aug 22, 2006)

n.n You should try the blurring tool on the hair, it works wonders. Mmm...maybe because of the hair, but the neck does appear a bit wide. [._. But who am I to talk? xD The necks I make are too narrow] :3 Also, maybe try blurring the little pink you put on the face. n.n I hope things turn out well! <3

marieel1953 (Aug 22, 2006)

Thanks for all the nice comments. I am experimenting with making the hair better and softer.

marieel1953 (Aug 22, 2006)
drawn in 6 min

Tried to soften the hair and cheek color

shalalaheartattack (Aug 21, 2006)
drawn in 3 min

Just went back and cleaned it up a tiny bit. Hardly different from the original.

resident-bishounen (Aug 21, 2006)

I like the bracelets. Neat angle, too.

shalalaheartattack (Aug 21, 2006)

Ah, thanks so much. I actually was wearing more bracelets in the original photo, but I decided I didn't want to exert the effort into drawing them all, haha.
*curtsies* Merci. Btw, I like your lineart.

Thanks.

It looks like a lot of bracelets the way it is; I can understand not wanting to add more. ^^;