There you go, much better, except (and it's minor but it's needed) the shoulder muscle wouldn't overlap the upper arm muscle (or in other words the line for the upper arm should be going in and towards the body, does that make sense?) and the upper arm wouldn't overlap the lower forearm, ite lower forearm would overlap the upper arm. Now this isn't bad at all, the way it is you did it right, but only if she were facing the right because her arm right now looks like it's reaching back behind her, and though it may be possible it'd be mighty uncomfortable. But these minor changes would bring the arm forward and conversly it'd be less straining. :)

that arm would hurt if it bent that way

Better, see the difference? Now she won't strain her arm, and I'm loving your coloring so far. Very good Itty.

why not?

That right leg looks..... weird. So does her left arm. But good work on making it look like pencils.
Still, that leg.

That looks much better. Porr thing, she's dead isn't she? *sniff*sniff*
Never noticed before, is that a ship in the bg? Nice design.

Hahaha! Nice details for such a short time :)

this is the winner... congrats

haha I didn't see this before, great job :)

Those colours and shapes are super. I love the long, thin rectangular sort of shapes that make up the mouth.

wow

you never fail to impress
especially with those organics and hard shapes combining

They all said what I wanted to, so I'll just say DA-YUM. :)

I agree. Its really nice!

this is cute
i like i like

it reminds me of peaches

And it reminds mé of Roxas, from KH II.

It's adorable. ^^

Hello, welcome to 2Draw.org!
If I were you, I'd start on the begginer board, Maiko does state that it should be intermediate work and higher over here :)
I'm not the best person to ask about shading, but if you post a question like that on the forum, I'm sure many talented people will help you
Tai x

I agree, this will be great.

wowwwww beautiful

omigosh. i cant wait to see this finished! i love those colors

looks like mice.

This is really pretty. :) Once you get used to the applet of Lascaux (I hated it at first, but it really is great once it's figured out) - try a smoother colouring style, obviously you have a good grip on the techniques of drawing.

Welcome to 2draw. :D Hope to see more from you, I do love the colour combinations in this. <33

Nice job for a first. You seem to know how to use Oekaki well, and yes Lascaux is the shizzle, it's spoiled me too much to try Shi. Nice lineart and great coloring. I love the highlights in her hair and on her shirt. Welcome aboard Kukomi.

welcome lovey

also not mah cupa tea, but i like the line work

welcome to 2draw kaki

I love it, especially the way the octopus jiggles, I believe the movement... Nice wallpaper Lori, it reminds me of the Sims. (And that's a good thing, they got me back into art).

I can sculpt one for you Punky, that's the best I can do

haha i love when you guys collab this is great and cute

and octopusses are just so fabulous