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Yeah, I see Lain, BNut if they are not nostrils, are they the sides of her nose? I like the coloring of her hair, and her eyes, But I think the right cheek bone is too big

my oatmeal is getting cold!

15grifficorntears (Feb 29, 2004)

oatmeal!
oatmeal!
so tender and sweet,
through my mouth to my feet.
give me oatmeal any day,
sugared, tosted it's ok!
i'll eat oatmeal in a train,
even out in the pouring rain!
i like oatmeal so should you!
it's better than sniffing glue.
oatmeal never getts old'
oops! gatta go it's getting cold!

8 comments – latest 4:

ToraNeko (edited Feb 29, 2004)

lol, Marcello, thats exactly what I thought when I read it! Althought I thought "Way" not "so much"

Wow its all steemy! Shoot, Now I'm hungry >.<
Edit: Darn typos!

marcello (Feb 29, 2004)

rikku: poems are all about b.s.
toraneko: that's weird though, syllable match works better in this case.

"even out in pouring rain" sounds better without the "the."

"oatmeal never gets old" sounds wrong as well...hmmm... maybe: "nice hot oatmeal never gets old; I gotta go, it's getting cold."

davincipoppalag (Feb 29, 2004)

poem aside.. I would like this better if it were sharpened up some.. I keep wanting to clean my reading glasses.. sharper..it would be a pretty good draw..

15grifficorntears (Feb 29, 2004)

hey give me some slack. I'm not the best poem writer, but the oatmeal does looks like it's from the point of view of an old man who's lost his glasses. 8)

Main Forums/2draw.net

ummm the chat?

brushes4 (Feb 29, 2004)

i see there is a chat, and im just curious, i pop in now and then and no one is ever there...i know this site is for drawing but i think it would be fun to actually talk with the talent...does anyone ever chat?

5 comments

Public Boards/Beginner

eleven finally!

lilypad (Feb 29, 2004)

please don't delete this...i turned eleven yesterday...

5 comments – latest 4:

sal (Feb 29, 2004)

...happy birthday.... hope u had a good 1...

dixielandcutie (Feb 29, 2004)

happy birthday!

marcello (Feb 29, 2004)

you're just begging to have it deleted it.

lilypad (edited Mar 5, 2004)

fine. but let me save it to my computer first, k? that will take until 'bout um...tomorrow 'cause i don't know when i'll get to my mum's house... i'm done saving it...

Public Boards/Intermediate

Cliche.

concannon (Feb 28, 2004)

Yep.

6 comments – latest 4:

marcello (Feb 28, 2004)

I'm disappointed in you.

davincipoppalag (Feb 28, 2004)

i sense a sky and landscape theme comin on.. lots of em poppin up.. l like this..

concannon (Feb 28, 2004)

Marcello: Yeah, you really should be. .___.

dixielandcutie (Feb 28, 2004)

nice cliche, its good

Landscapes huh?

EverDream (Feb 28, 2004)

Ugh...I am NOT a landscapes person but at least I tried. No photo referance used. Mouse.

26 comments – latest 4:

EverDream (Mar 2, 2004)

Em.....follow the yellow brick road?
No really, the reason I do linework well with mouse is because of practice...and I've also had LOADS of practice with a pencil. Personally I like the tablet but I think I still work just as well with a mouse because I've trained my hand to work steadily with it. Any one just starting with either is going to have problems....>.>....um any who....yeah. ^^;

gloworm043 (Apr 17, 2004)

With all of the comments you've already recieved on this piece..mine probably won't mean much..but just wanted to say how impressed I am with your work...Beautiful!!!

Yuugi-chan (Aug 22, 2004)

Nice glare effect.

ThatGuy (Jun 29, 2009)

I absolutely love the emotion this evokes. So serene.

Specialty Boards/Collaborations

Shexshay Ladieesh?

Fin_beast, Hakkai, and Nanibunny (Sep 25, 2003)

Well this is my attempt at a shexshay lady.... I'm pretty pleased with it... Well at least i have improved a bit since i started at 2draw! =D

I was planning on having 3 shexshay ladies by different people. 8)

So if you would like to collaborate.....then let me know!
But before you apply.....just think. Can i draw a reasnably shexshay lady?
If the answer to that question is no.......then dont apply. simple. :) Thanks. :D
Someone could do the background if they would like!

(Sorry about the spelling)

Im hopeing now the lady looks a bit more sexy......someone might want to collab?

21 comments – latest 4:

Nanibunny (Jun 6, 2004)

I would like to try it! If you two still want another shexshay lady that is. ^_^

Fin_beast (Jun 6, 2004)

Sure Nanibunny. You're added!