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im getting better lol please comment this time
deathking
(Jan 9, 2007)
its not that good maybe some critique would help
Great_white (edited Jan 9, 2007)
Nice picture.
deathking (Jan 9, 2007)
thank u ure the first comment i got on this oekaki
Shortiebop (Jan 9, 2007)
your work is good
Sweetcell (Jan 11, 2007)
Her heads a little too thin, it needs to be thicker by adding more hair volumne to the back, and shortening the forhead, making it rounder. Where you see the color of her skin showing use the soft erasure on med and slowly shave it down to where the color starts, as you have it the proper profile is there, but the whites making her look... lumpy? And shave some of the white from her neck too so it curves. Arch her brow a bit more and darken her lips slightly with a small highlight and bonza. I hope you take this as suggestions DK, you really are quite good (and on a laptop no less) |
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TheCrimsonKing
(Jan 9, 2007)
Fair enough
fleeting_memory (Jan 10, 2007)
hm-different from version two. I liked the natural feel of the older one but the newer one looks good too and has a very porcelin doll feel to it.
nekodesu (Jan 11, 2007)
Why must you be so awesome? :0 I love the contrast of red and black.
Sweetcell (Jan 11, 2007)
Oh she's so pretty, and like fleeting says very different from you. Lovely subtle lighting. Please do more of these.
Renuar (Jan 16, 2007)
great darkness |
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jaded_angel
(Jan 9, 2007)
This time I used a reference...all I can say is that I tried...it looks something like the pic http://www.jessesage-makeup.com/images/index_03.jpg
Fiesta (Jan 10, 2007)
Pretty.. :O
sweet_insanity (Jan 10, 2007)
this actually kinda looks like kiersten dunst (sp?)
shanesemler (Jan 10, 2007)
Nice shading on the face. :)
jaded_angel (Jan 10, 2007)
Now that you have said it it actually does look like her kiersten dunst (sp? I dont kno either). I fine that most of my pics end up looking like people I know it must be a subconscious thing...it actually looks like my cousin... |
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