Her heads a little too thin, it needs to be thicker by adding more hair volumne to the back, and shortening the forhead, making it rounder. Where you see the color of her skin showing use the soft erasure on med and slowly shave it down to where the color starts, as you have it the proper profile is there, but the whites making her look... lumpy? And shave some of the white from her neck too so it curves. Arch her brow a bit more and darken her lips slightly with a small highlight and bonza. I hope you take this as suggestions DK, you really are quite good (and on a laptop no less)
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