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Hey, that's not very nice! It's only his second picture. :( MattyP, it's not perfect, and a lot of TGgold's points are valid, but I have seen much, much worse. Anyway, I know you'll get better if you keep practicing. Keep trying!

concannon (edited Jun 18, 2003)

I think it's fairly good...don't mind TGgold. It could stand improvement, but improvement takes practice, so just keep it up.

TGgold (edited Jun 18, 2003)

No, please do mind me. I know that people are trying to keep you from being discouraged, but I've been hanging around oekaki boards for quite some time, and I mod one myself. You have to be blunt with beginners, or else they'll draw many pictures of the same poor qualoity, and not strive to improve enough. At least if people tell the truth then they know what the heck to work on and that people pay attention to what they're doing. Believe me, I can barely C&C this picture because there was not enough atempted for me to comment on. There could have been shading, more details, clothing folds, ect. I don't care if they are terrible, but if they're attempted I know the person is trying.
Reasons why I stay in practice boards is to
A) Help those who accept help
B) See people reactions and observe growth over time. It helps me develop my own style if i track someone long enough.

I DO NOT come to boards to see people ask for crit and then become offended when they get the truth from me. I DO NOT come to boards to be yelled at for telling the truth.

Oh yes, while this is his second picture, you must see, it is visible that there are many flaws with the picture...very easy to see. The artist could at least attempt to change his mistakes to a satisfactory level. And there is a print screen button, it allows you to save an image on your screen, so you don't need to post every image, especially lowpar ones. They take up room.

So, if you don't want my opinon of something, don't ask. I'm not as comforting and decieving as the other members.

marcello (edited Jun 18, 2003)

TGgold: Though you have good points, after watching the animation, I have reason to believe most of the 'mistakes' you refer to are actually intentional and part of the style the artist was attempting to achieve. Rather, the mistakes don't detract from the image, and fixing them wouldn't improve the image (and quite possibly hurt it).

In a sense, I'd say this drawing is more successful than most, because it took a limited set of tools and came up with a visually pleasing piece. If you look at the animation you'll notice the artist recolored and resketched the piece more than once. One thing this image has that most don't is a sense of style.

Whether or not any of that was intentional, I can't say, but rather than point out 'mistakes' which are more accurately stylistic choices, it might be better to look at what parts are unfitting for the particular image's overall effect. In this case, the moon is probably the weakest part, it is too precise and lacks the same sense of distinguishment from the rest of the piece. maybe if it were hand drawn, and perhaps if it had an outline, it would have a better effect, but I can't say for sure.

Now of course, if you made 5 pictures that were basically the same as this, then I'd consider it spam, but there's probably worse stuff to critique than this.

And TCgold, I don't mean to insult your critique, and I completely agree with how spineless most people are on boards like this, and can't take any critisism. It just seems out of place in this picture.

Public Boards/Intermediate

Mistah Squintie Eyes n' Hurt Buddy?

Hakkai (Jun 17, 2003)

o_o;; ... I dunno... MSE is more like 'Get the fuck off' than 'I lub you'.

Please forgive the squiggle lines.. I felt too lazy today..

6 comments – latest 4:

taori (edited Jun 17, 2003)

Hahaha those are the greatest expressions ever.

Maiko (edited Jun 17, 2003)

awwww.. ^__^;;;;; *sighs*
still depressed... O___o
-Kitsunebi

Merulotte (edited Jun 17, 2003)

Hey, that's really cute...
'MSE' looks almost annoyed, I agree...
But maybe next time they'll be all cheery and happy and stuff! Yeah!
I really like your works, Hakkai... They're so... Unique, and refreshing.
Not to mention that Shounen-Ai is a perfect addition to ANY oekaki board. Now for the low low price of... Oh, I'm getting carried away...
Anyhow... Great work, once more, Hakkai...

TGgold (edited Jun 18, 2003)

VisceralVamp, this is shounan-ai.....Yaoi is the more steamy hot loveness. Anywho, I like this style a lot. It's very nice to look at ^_^

Main Forums/2draw.net

Just a question...

UppityCracker (edited Apr 15, 2003)

Does anyone else cut themselves to "feel"? To know that they're alive? To realize everything that they've lost or gained? To become one with themselve's while leaving their body? To feel the pain of love? Does anyone cut themselves to "feel"? Just a question...

10 comments

Public Boards/Beginner

The Simplest form of myself.

Hakkai (Jun 18, 2003)

I was doodling last night on a stetch book.. tried to draw myself.. this is what I came up with. >_<;

3 comments – latest 3:

concannon (edited Jun 18, 2003)

LOL, awww. Cuteness. And green.

OneWingedMoo9se (edited Jun 18, 2003)

Ha Ha. What an adorable expression. Cute bunny man/lady.

Maiko (edited Jun 18, 2003)

......hey...really cute ^__^;;; ;__;
i'm gonna miss you....
-Kitsunebi

a surfer chick

lord_kitchigai (Jun 17, 2003)

a cute girl at a beach at sunset

5 comments – latest 4:

coffeejelly (edited Jun 17, 2003)

she looks so sexy, just like me :'3

Ryoko_HomsBaby (edited Jun 18, 2003)

I like. :)

Einz (edited Jun 18, 2003)

the shading is a bit of off on her belly
it should be a little higher
same for the shading at her collarbone
but anyway i like
o_O;

concannon (edited Jun 18, 2003)

Oh, nice. Her arm should be a lil' longer...but great job overall.

Stupid little creatur

Naoki (Jun 16, 2003)

hmm...it looks cute

4 comments – latest 4:

bladefist (edited Jun 16, 2003)

Cute indeed... actually, it looks like a female Angeling from Ragnarok :)

Joker|The_Immortal| (edited Jun 16, 2003)

yea have to agree with bladefist looks like a angelring.. you been hunting Empirium too long?

Naoki (edited Jun 16, 2003)

I don't know ragnarok....

concannon (edited Jun 18, 2003)

Whatever it is, I think it's cute. Despite the pink-ness. *twitch wince* Gyah, pink.

Assholes of Anime

Hakkai (Jun 14, 2003)

n_n; The heartless bastards of Anime... That I know of so far.
Heero Yuy of 'Gundam Wing' and Hayami Tetsu of 'Blue Submarine 6'.
Practicing... Practicing... Practicing...

8 comments – latest 4:

mazi (edited Jun 14, 2003)

1 X 2. all the way. all night long..

*cough*

concannon (edited Jun 15, 2003)

I wuv Heero...and Duo...in comprimising positions...

*coughs, mazi-esque*

Maiko (edited Jun 15, 2003)

.........................HIIIIIIRROOOO!!! COME BACK AND KILL MEH!!
^__^ LoL i feel hated, cuz my friends dubbed me Hiiro...-__- *cries* BTW i love Hiiro's quote!: Omae wa Korosuzo
-Kitsunebi

concannon (edited Jun 18, 2003)

I thought it was 'Omae o korosu'. o.O

Punky finger

Naoki (Jun 18, 2003)

Punk powaaa!!!

1 comment – latest 1:

concannon (edited Jun 18, 2003)

...*snicker*

The 'You Can't Hit Me Because I Have Glasses' Thumb.

Hakkai (Jun 18, 2003)

Lol. For the Thumb Wrestle! It may not be the scariest or the funniest.. but its still there! Laughing victoriously for its logic! n_n;

I couldn't draw a realistic thumb.. so I went and drew all over Mistah Squintie Eye's Thumb! XD

-Edited because I can't spell 'But'.-

2 comments – latest 2:

Einz (edited Jun 18, 2003)

thats funny

concannon (edited Jun 18, 2003)

Can I give him a wig?

Bwaha, thumb glasses.

Happy Mask Thumb...

bladefist (Jun 18, 2003)

My thumb is competing for the scariest... He has adopted the look of Majora's Mask's Happy Mask Salesman, when he gets angry.

...well, I thought he was scary.

1 comment – latest 1:

concannon (edited Jun 18, 2003)

......O.o

Nice shading.

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