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Nami The River Spirit
fluffeh_neko
(May 14, 2006)
Still in the process of working on this. Nami is a character I made up for a roleplay. She's a river spirit.Kind of getting the hang of this oekaki thing! ^__^ Compliments and Criticism would be nice!
April94 (May 16, 2006)
I like the color and i like how you designed the hair
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 16, 2006)
Me too, but, I also like the way her eyes and face are.
fluffeh_neko (May 17, 2006)
Why, thank you! ^__^
NOVEMBER93 (May 19, 2006)
i like the hair and the mouth...and not that i have any room to judge, but you should probably make the eyes less pointy....unless it's supposed to be like that, then i understand (looks good for this picture though) |
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Wild_Mustang_Girl312
(May 14, 2006)
Eh....... This is my first horse with layers.... He is a palamino horse..... um.... I'll add a backround later... I need critique....
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 14, 2006)
Eh... he's meant to have his maw up. With a sense of pride and all that stuff.... yeah.... I'll work on it. Thanks.Okay... I fixed up the nostril, made the muzzle smaller and added a sky....it doesn't look /that/ bad.....
ryank19948 (May 14, 2006)
i like this one too
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 15, 2006)
I like the clouds.... they're mesmorizing.... |
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Wild_Mustang_Girl312
(May 5, 2006)
Okay... This is the first time I've drawn a person on the computer. Please tell me what needs to be done to help it. I'm putting as unfinished. The backround is horrible, I know.
theonlyone (May 6, 2006)
Okay- try studying peoples faces- I know that sounds weird but when you're around people just look at the shape, examine the eyes, the nose, AND ESPECIALLY THE CHIN, and shape of face.Try getting smoother lines- and if you're using a mouse it's really hard to make smooth lines. I have a really annoying mouse. So- um yeah. Keep at it.^^
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 6, 2006)
I have an annoying mouse too. I know I suck at drawing people. I can't draw them with pencil and paper either. My friends persuaded me to draw one on here. Eh... didn't want to. I'd rather stick to animals and what I'm better at, but, that's alright, I guess.
shults (May 15, 2006)
one tip i can give, is to stare at people in buses. Thats what i do anyway. sometimes they notice and freak out, butits not like im ever gonna see em again. :)luck.
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 15, 2006)
Thanks shults. I'll work on that. I've been trying to draw them on paper first. |
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pandabarrie
(May 14, 2006)
(WIP. 2draw has been slow)for mothers day :)
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 14, 2006)
Aww.... I like the shading and everything.... peacefullness..... awesome..... I could never do this.
shults (May 15, 2006)
cane back to see it done. :)ilove the obvious sun beams.
DarkCloak (May 17, 2006)
Awww... this brings a tear to my eye. <:)
tandrew971 (May 23, 2006)
i agree with wild mustang girl..very peaceful, and awesome |
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NOVEMBER93
(May 8, 2006)
xxx
keikai (May 13, 2006)
It's very good. If I may be so rude as to butt my head in where it does not belong, I don't think you should feel offended. They aren't trying to me mean and pick on your drawings, just giving a tiny bit of critique so you can learn and grow to be better than before. In my opinion it's very nice, however, I agree it could use some fixing up (then again I need a lot of fixing up myself). As for the eye I doubt they ment an anime eye, more along the lines of a different shading or shape of some sort. Sorry if I seem really rude ^^; I don't mean to be.
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 14, 2006)
I like teh shading in the grass and sky, you still need to fix up the sketchyness... who am I to talk? I dunno... I can't draw *shrugs**fades away into darkness*
DrsFan (May 14, 2006)
cougers have cat noses not just nostrils.havent you ever seen a couger before? |
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Darn the cold of winter XD....DoOp, just so you know, the big shirt thing is a pancho
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NOVEMBER93 (May 4, 2006)
thank ya's...and the only thing i am having problems with is the skin...it looks slightly yellow....and i am proud of myselfi tried workig on teh background....i kinda like it
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 8, 2006)
I likes it..... blending needs a bit of work but otherwise....*thumbs up*Hahaa...It's fun to revise old pictures ;D
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yuohoo, this is the collab....you can color this....i am not good at coloring things..at all...or if anyone else wants to color, just tell me....^.^
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Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 8, 2006)
I luff this more!! Nicely shaded and everything!!! So awesome.....
NOVEMBER93 (May 8, 2006)
zomg! i love it sooo much! it looks completely awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fluffeh_neko (May 14, 2006)
I love the coloring & shading on this! How did you do it?!Well anyways, So cute! ^0^
xiau (May 14, 2006)
With pen and a freckload of airbrushing and soft erasing :B (no blur!)Anyways, I like the linearting bestest <3 |
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davincipoppalag (May 13, 2006)
Great picture! Draw more!
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 14, 2006)
Wow.....KORN ROCKS!!!!! I love this.....
Sufiroyce (May 23, 2006)
Good god. heh thats the name of a KoRn song good job |
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keikai
(May 12, 2006)
All somehow tied together by my main character, these three venture throughout the land in search of a certain friend. The standing one is Saieida (Sai) who is very shy, and wears a large green bow (though it looks more like a green blob). The sitting one is Akiska (Aki), he's very stubborn and will only swallow his pride if he is in the presence of those who could cause him trouble, he's a 'teen' and has raised his little sister even though he is young himself. The laying one is Kivka (Kiv), Aki's sister. She's rather hyper but also minds her manners since Saieida helped raise her, at the moment she's still a pup.
Airin (May 13, 2006)
I think you could do well if you tried some different or more advanced lineart, I've got to contradict myself though, it's the simplicity of your art that really catches my eye.
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 14, 2006)
I'm being a hipocrite.... dang... I love it, but, I think you should get away from the 2nd-grader-like sun. The up in the corner thing... kinda little-kiddish. I have no room to say anything, since, I have a sun simalar on my llama picture... oh well... I'll get to work on that....
Sweetcell (edited May 14, 2006)
Ok, Wild Mustang Girl, not to sound like a bitch but you need to advance a bit before you critique. Keikai has come a long way from when she started and has well improved, take your same advice mmkay?Keikai your working well. Your line art is improving, and glad you took the advice about direct light. The shading came out fine. Akiska's right leg would be darker because his body would cast a shadow and so would Sai's. Some strips of grass under and over their paws would break up the feeling that their floating, which is what it looks like at the moment, and don't be afraid to work more on the clouds. Not so much blobs but fluffy cotton. As for the sun make it smaller and less bright and try to blend or wash out the yellow a bit so it isn't as harsh a contrast between the sky and sun. Really are improving girlfriend. Well done. I like it, and the story.
keikai (Jun 16, 2006)
Thanks sweetcell. I'll try to keep improving with your help. In a way I'm gonna have to agree with Mustang Girl, the suns I make look sort of childish. Oh well, with the info you gave me I'm sure I'll figure out a way to make it better. I'll remember to use the grass idea for my future pictures since I've been doing grass a lot lately. Thanks so much for all your help! |
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Rosemary
(May 11, 2006)
i dunno...feeling rotten today..think im coming down with a cold :( timer is way off drew it while i was on the phone with my mum (i still am but she's brb lol) lazy picture...not my usual style lol
ak.to.v.his.di (May 15, 2006)
that's so cute! i like how you did this and the colors you used
101_Torchic_101 (Jun 28, 2006)
(*,*) Omg, how could I have not seen this?! It's adorable!~~
Sweetcell (Jun 28, 2006)
psychedelic bunny, and patch work at that. sweetness.
Rosemary (Jul 21, 2006)
lol thanks all :) |
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