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Thirsty
mad_one63
(Mar 24, 2005)
I will drink a beer now.
Shanghai (Mar 24, 2005)
I've never had one myself. The style here with the pure black lines and the sold fields of color reminds me of a woodblock print. |
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Soul~Fly
(Mar 14, 2005)
ehh..bored
HunterKiller_ (Mar 14, 2005)
Whoa... cool... so... trippy... =O~~~
Shanghai (Mar 15, 2005)
You're freaking me out man, you're freaking me out! @_@
emmamommalag (Mar 15, 2005)
Whoa.. that makes me dizzy. |
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Saiyanangie
(Mar 14, 2005)
Heh! I just like this I guess.
Shanghai (Mar 15, 2005)
I once read in a book that the only three colors that have words for them in every language in the world are black, white, and red. Those are, on a primal level, the three most powerful colors. Only the more developed world langauges even have words for blue. Also, from what I've read, in ancient Egypt red represented desert, black was a color of life from the dark, fertile soil by the Nile, and white was death. I'm not 100% sure on that though since it was a long time ago that I read it, but since you have what looks like an ankh there then it may have some importance.Improvement?
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unicorn
(Mar 9, 2005)
hmmm a bay horse |
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MidnightRaven99
(Mar 12, 2005)
It was going to be a girl with green hair, because there should be more green-haired people in the world. Then it turned out that she looked like a tree... yea, not so great. So I gave the tree-girl an extreme makeover and she turned out like this.
Shanghai (Mar 13, 2005)
Interesting tattoo's/designs on her face and neck. Do they mean something or are they just there as designs?
MidnightRaven99 (Mar 13, 2005)
I saw them once somewhere, so i decided to use them in this....i dont think they mean anything, its just random
Shanghai (Mar 13, 2005)
Well they do look good, both the design and your ability to draw them. It just tends to add a little more depth to something if we can make a connection to some sort of meaning behind them. |
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medievalist-
(Mar 9, 2005)
Rawr, doing scray is hard. But doing scared is easy.. funny how things turn out really..
Shanghai (Mar 10, 2005)
Since you say it'll be scary later I'm wondering if you're planning on adjusting the expression. As it is she looks somewhat happy and has an anticipating look to her, sort of like a puppy. Maybe if you changed it enough that she's not so innocently happy but more in a sinister way then combined with the anticipation she'd look like she's about to attack?grr doing scary is hard..
Shanghai (Mar 11, 2005)
I think now it's looking a bit disturbing, and the harsher lighting helps a lot. To some extent there's an aspect of fear here, partly from her looking scared and partly from us being concerned about what it is she's seeing/experiencing that has her in this state, but I'm not sensing the fear being something that she is purposefully causing. It's more like she's the one in fear and we feel it through her. The pure and near-pure whites you've used in her, her clothes, and the background all add up to giving an impression of hositalization. Maybe she's in a mental hospital? The collar on her neck certainly indicates bondage and being inprisoned because of the chain link on it. If you wanted to explore that further you could have some aspect of being wrongfully placed in a mental institute, something that does sometimes happen and is a very real fear that many people have.
plasma_ooganator (Mar 12, 2005)
you should make a black and red background. and the thing on her cheek should be red |
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hoopstarchick10
(Mar 11, 2005)
Hmmm...I'm not sure if I'm finished yet or not.
Shanghai (edited Mar 12, 2005)
I think that you can work on the hair a bit more before calling it finished. The color scheme looks good but the way you've set it up there's black likes and airbrushed color, and they don't match up. Because in places a bright highlight will cross over from one part of hair, over a black line, and onto another part of hair, it makes me wonder why even have the lines if they don't have any relation with the light and shadow. To make this finished I'd like to see you adjust thost highlights and shaded areas to match up with the lines better.Better??
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A3
(Feb 28, 2005)
Because Danny is just too cute :DHopefully fixed to a satisfactory level...
Kink (Feb 28, 2005)
Sexy. Nice look, I like the faded colors.
StrawberryYamichan (Feb 28, 2005)
Mmm Danny! He's cute :)
squee (Mar 11, 2005)
I love it! Danny is certainly hot >:D |
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Kateya
(Mar 10, 2005)
only two number Oekaki.
squee (Mar 10, 2005)
cute ^^ Love the saying on the shirt. XD
silver_maiden (Mar 11, 2005)
really cool! i luve the pose!
Shanghai (Mar 11, 2005)
I like how it's looking, but I'm not sure if there was a real reason you made the darks on her shirt the same color as the background. The reason I'm bringing that up is because it's causing her body to become lost in the background and she'd have a lot more definement if you used a slightly different shade.
StrawberryYamichan (Mar 11, 2005)
Cute style :D! The lineart is sorta blinding compared to the colours, but the colours are pretty. Hehe, can I have her shirt? |
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Mystafreya
(Mar 10, 2005)
hai there, everyone! first post on here..well.... anyway! this is my IZ fanchar. Mystafreya. I'll constantly be coloring in watercolor's.. solids rarely!
Shanghai (Mar 11, 2005)
I think it could use more refinement before calling it finished. Watercolors are great for their delicacy and their flow, though that's not the only way they're used, but here I'm getting much more the impression of a marker that was running out of ink rather than the smoothness of water. I think you should pay more attention to the lighting and the shadows here myself. |
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