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vegetable
(Jul 27, 2007)
lol. this is my first drawing here in intermeidiate. ^^My favorite part is the saliva from his mouth (where else)? Anyways, you can call me Linz. <3 |
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PAKS
(Jul 26, 2007)
what do you think its just something I put 2 gether ps my spelling is bad.
Mocha_Bean (Jul 26, 2007)
@_@ When my eyes move, it looks like it's moving. And it makes my eyes hurt. D: |
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Hokori
(Jul 19, 2007)
Hmm...
Mocha_Bean (Jul 23, 2007)
I agree with you, Hokori. Women are much more fun to draw. All the reasons you listed are exactly why I like drawing women, lol. Also, I've never really tried drawing men. >_> I like the background the most, it gives the drawing more character. Did you forget to shade the bow? o_O
Sweetcell (Jul 23, 2007)
I draw women a lot because it's easier, but if you don't draw men on occasion you'll find it hard in the future, as with all things it's ggod practice.And damn now I want to read the whole story and find out what the hells going on. The beggining I thought something totally different was happening. It's morbid, and freakifying, and well done. The picture that is.
Hokori (Jul 24, 2007)
Sweetcell: You want to read my book? It's here: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2214719/1/Mocha: Yeah... I forgot to shade the bow. I might fix it in a little while... but it's not too noticeable, I think. >.<' Forgotten Bow shaded.
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dark_angel
(Jul 22, 2007)
omg my mouse was stickin really bad because its sooo old and crappy, anyways i still have alot to do on this , i jus had to stop cuz i was gettin really frustrated
Miss_DJ (Jul 22, 2007)
great beginning! super lips, you're well on your way to wonderful!
deathking (Jul 22, 2007)
I think that if you have to say something like "I draw better on paper", you really dont draw well on paper either.
Mocha_Bean (Jul 22, 2007)
I think this looks good so far!! Really liking the lips too! :DDK- what are you talking about?
Kanuto (Jul 23, 2007)
Damm youre drawing this with a mouse?? Looks very nice ! |
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PaintIt13lack (Jul 22, 2007)
i think i may still edit this.... the more i look at it the more i get mad... i think i need to change the eyes, the mouth looks a little small... and the skin could go darker... argh... and all this will probably add another hour or so of work...
Mocha_Bean (Jul 22, 2007)
OMG HIRO! I love Heroes and I love Hiro. He's so adorable.Yea, I think you need to add pupils to his eyes, make his mouth a tiny tiny bit bigger..smooth out his hair and skin, and it'll be better. :D Good job so far!
davincipoppalag (Jul 22, 2007)
This is good stuff...sorta looks a little like Julian Lennon..eh...
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vapor
(Jul 12, 2007)
a mouth. reference used.
davincipoppalag (Jul 12, 2007)
Uvula exposed!! A tour de force in realism...
friend (Jul 12, 2007)
Ahh!
Miss_DJ (Jul 12, 2007)
wow great job on this. the first thing I thought was, "yuck, somebody's kissin that mouth....ewwwww!"...lol
shell (Apr 2, 2010)
cool |
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IKS
(Jul 10, 2007)
yes I suck at naming things XD oh well... this took a while, and is my first Oekaki drawing in a LONG time. Havent drawn on 2Draw in a while and actually forgot my other account name.
Mocha_Bean (Jul 11, 2007)
I really like the perspective and the hair..but I noticed the the left eye (our right) is a little far up or the right eye is too far down >_>. Otherwise, this is awesome! :D
Childlike_Vampire (Jul 12, 2007)
Yay pretty red hair and beautiful face and boobies and swords. Really great drawing, has lots of motion, and I love the colors.
Wraith (Jul 15, 2007)
WOW! I really love the hair! This drawing would look awsome as a poster in my room! Great stuff IKS!
Sweetcell (Jul 16, 2007)
Long time commenting. I love everything about this, to the deep reds in the bg, dress and hair (my God that hair, so amazing) to the skin tones and the blade. Even the sketchy lines work. And good job on the perspective. I agree with Mocha but I think it's more her right eye needs to be raised, not her left lowered but it's really minor in comparison to the rest of the piece. Welcome and please stick around and do more. |
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Mocha_Bean
(Jul 9, 2007)
I'm so fucking mad at this. -_- This looks worse than the damn reference. And my head hurts.
Mocha_Bean (Jul 10, 2007)
:D Thank you Davinci and TripleE! *hugs*
Punky (Jul 10, 2007)
You think this looks bad? I think it looks lovely. c:
Sweetcell (Jul 10, 2007)
It's wonderful Mocha, I liked the angle of the face on V1, but this V she has attitude.Don't be mad, came out supah.
Mocha_Bean (Jul 10, 2007)
Thank you Punky and Sweetcell! :D |
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TripleE313
(Jul 9, 2007)
Haha, I'm in a comical mood today, can ya tell?
davincipoppalag (Jul 9, 2007)
Hahahahaha...lmao.. great.EEE ! haha
Mocha_Bean (Jul 10, 2007)
Omfg, lmao..That made my day, TripleE! Made me laugh pretty hard!
friend (Jul 10, 2007)
I'll remember not to buy that cereal.
Sweetcell (Jul 10, 2007)
Hahahahahahahahahaha |
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Mocha_Bean
(Jul 7, 2007)
Well...wow..I don't know what to say about this really. I used a reference for this http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24864778/ . I almost cried when I started because I was so frustrated. (I'm such a baby.)The lips are off, I know. >_> I'm way too tired to care. (Used only one layer o_O) C&C welcome. <33
Anna (Jul 9, 2007)
wow nice job here! lovin the eyes :-)
Mocha_Bean (Jul 9, 2007)
Thank you Anna! :D
JK-Arts (Nov 3, 2007)
wow.
shell (Apr 8, 2010)
pretty |
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You should practice some more in Beginners before you post here on Intermediate.
The lineart needs to be a lot cleaner and smoother. Try using the pen tool for smoother lines.
Like the colors, but not your attitude. :|
And I think you should cool it with the criticism of what other people say on here. They've been here a lot longer than you have and developed bonds with each other. So you wouldn't understand the inside jokes, such as "boobs cam". You shouldn't be quick to judge or assume.
An addendum vegetable, if you go on with your critisism before getting to know anyone here first..... you'll find yourself very lonely.
And everything she said about this picture is spot on. Using the airbrush or watercolor tool will give you smoother lines, and being bolder with the shading and highlight will make this more dimensional, and a different colored bg would work better. And as Mocha said, start on begginers to get to know the tools and progress before you make your way to Intermediate. If your not sure, please read the rules.