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anangelmyself24
(Aug 31, 2005)
Meh I hate backgrounds, I gave up >.< this waws an extremely quick drawing as you can see, just felt a little bored. My lineart as usual is complete rubbish lol but I'm working on it ;) heh. constructve criticism would be great. Hmm this is only my second oekaki and my colouring is terrible too lol XD damn this would almost make me never want to oekaki every again lol :P |
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Loogie
(Aug 21, 2005)
Face.
renire (Aug 21, 2005)
Thats SO cool! Its amazing! Wow! Erh....Yeah! XD
KH44N (Aug 21, 2005)
This is really nice. I like the eye. Damn... i wish i could draw like that. Great job! ^__^
BSOD (Aug 21, 2005)
Teh lips :DDDDDD I heart joo >__>
LisaAnne (Aug 31, 2005)
Nice color choices...I enjoy the hatching as well. |
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Chiyo-chan
(Aug 25, 2005)
When people say what does your mind look like I think of this. Not done of course. lol
LisaAnne (Aug 25, 2005)
Hmm....I'll be very curious to see what this transforms into...what you have thus far makes me think alot about when you close your eyes tight, how you see the little left over fragments of color/light from your memmory/vision.What a wonderful run on sentence I have for you there haha. Anyway those colored dots are intriguing. ahhh it's doesn't look like much but it's all good
ahhh I don't know anymore
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thesolarwinds
(Aug 30, 2005)
erm.. maybe a different background?i dunno... i liked the drawing, but coloring it is... i dunno...
davincipoppalag (Aug 30, 2005)
This has a nice free feel to it. I like the flowing colors and the material
lycene (Aug 30, 2005)
This looks good so far; you've really captured the movement and emotion very well. If you spend more time on it, refining the coloring and whatnot, this has the potential to be excellent.
LisaAnne (Aug 31, 2005)
Thus far I'm in love with the movement, and body position...I can't wait to see it finished. My only concern is that the figure not compete with the background, and that's only because I just love the formal aspects of this piece.erm....
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freefall
(Aug 7, 2005)
crazy mood
emmamommalag (Aug 9, 2005)
Wow, this is picture is so cool. I love the faces and the red.. looking forward to seeing it when you're finished.
Heartsdomain (edited Aug 12, 2005)
Yeah man this picture rulzzzz! lol
LisaAnne (Aug 11, 2005)
I feel like I could dive into this, and find many things that are not even seen up front. very nice, and interesting texture.
sincity (Aug 30, 2005)
How did I miss this? I like it. |
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zep
(Aug 15, 2005)
lack of sizes in the tool, size 32 is the minimun number....
LisaAnne (Aug 17, 2005)
Oh wow I love this latest version...Kind of has a warhol flavor to it...yet a very inner psyche type feel as well. Great use of texture...I think also using the simple black and white pallette helps bring about the little touches of red, and conceptual weight. (Haha I don't know if that made sense it all...if not : "I like it".)
kejoco (Aug 18, 2005)
Zep, this is really cool and creepy, great jobI like the photographic border, if i saw a real picture like this, i would lose my shit
Shanghai (Aug 19, 2005)
It reminds me of the Obey Giant art.
staci (Aug 30, 2005)
:o..creepy and cool..looks like the son of sam dude |
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Mal
(Aug 29, 2005)
Used a pic of a peach for a reference but the composition was mine :o)
davincipoppalag (Aug 29, 2005)
Nice ...like you did it with pastels..
renire (Aug 30, 2005)
Yeah, what davincipoppalag said. But I think it looks too 'Aplley'. <:D
lycene (Aug 30, 2005)
Nah, Renire, this definitely is a peach. See how soft it is? I really like the colors, but I agree with LisaAnne; either the peach or the background need to be a bit sharper to give a little bit more definition to the pic.
Mal (Aug 30, 2005)
Thanks everyone , I do agree that the peach lacks definition , I have ran out of space so will keep it in mind for future drawings. |
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solve
(Aug 29, 2005)
more silent hill.
GOODBYE (Aug 30, 2005)
it looks like. the male genitalia with extra skin that's stuffed with red caviar.
sincity (Aug 30, 2005)
I like fleshy lips. Heh.:}
solve (edited May 30, 2006)
It clearly is a penis.
LisaAnne (Aug 30, 2005)
Haha...well you know I saw it more feminine....either way I still like the designs. |
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sal
(Mar 27, 2004)
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davincipoppalag (Mar 27, 2004)
aww lil puppydog... hes got a quizzical look on his face
LisaAnne (Aug 30, 2005)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v296/LisaLuvsArtTWO/FamilyNfriends/eastonAnniesmall.jpgThis great...reminds me of my Dog Easton in the above photo. I drew his snout on here as my first drawing. I liked looking through your user board...its interesting to see all the ideas flowing, changes in style, and possible influences. I like your use of design components as well. |
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sal
(Dec 7, 2004)
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davincipoppalag (Dec 7, 2004)
This is good sal!
upham (Dec 8, 2004)
wats wrong with playing piano to much . Good drawing
LisaAnne (Aug 30, 2005)
The comments on this alone say alot to me about the power of this piece...it's simple enough, yet detailed enough to provide multiple reactions, and personal meaning. I also enjoy the repition of the verticle lines in this along with the position of the hand. |
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Second, I'm not too good at computer art, or have knowledge of anime, but here are things that might help you: I'm sorry if you already know them.
-Layers...if you use the layers, you can often save alot of work, and it might help you with the background issue as well.
-Sometimes using a thicker "pen" in diameter can help smooth the lines out a little, just in the fact that they can reach more angled, or partial pixels.
Anyway, I rather like the pose she has, and it looks like you do a good job coloring as well...keep trying, because you seem skilled.