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I have to concur, this needs more shading; the colours you've used are so very pale that I could barely even tell that there was anything in the image, other than the two brows, at first. I like your choice of perspective, and I look forward to seeing where you go with this piece, from here.

I'm returning after an extended absence myself, and ironically enough, I've started out with something similar, with similar problems. But if my piece is too pale (which I firmly believe it is), this one is practically invisible. One easy way to change that might be to change the background colour, so that your pale choice of skin tone is against a dark/black background.

One other C&C -- the proportions of the face are good, from what I can see of it, but the shading on the nose makes it look just a little askew, based on a line from the tip of the chin to half-way between the brows. You may want to remember that the straight line of shadow (down the shadow side of the nose) is broken at the end by a small curve, where the tip of the nose flares out.

Good luck with this! :)

xxtaliexx (Dec 15, 2004)
drawn in 35 min

xS not done at all...

xxtaliexx (Dec 16, 2004)
drawn in 9 min

just touching up.. dont have time to finish now

Xodiak (Dec 18, 2004)

Miss Natalie, I like your attempt at a realistic face. If you find a clear, large photograph with nice lighting and contrast, you can draw a realistic drawing easier. A good guide is to study which places are darker and which are lighter. Keep drawing, I like your artwork! >:D
|XOD|

Public Boards/Beginner

lonewolfpup

foxxspirit (Dec 12, 2004)

poor beginning drawing please hate it at will

1 comment – latest 1:

Knockoff (Dec 12, 2004)

Okay, you don't need to say that again! ((((sux0rz)))))

Evil Kirby!

Kilala (Dec 12, 2004)

Don't you wish kirby was on the evil side? I think that would be so awsome!

9 comments – latest 4:

Dagan (Dec 14, 2004)

Noooooooooooooooo, Don't do it Kirby! You must resist the power of the darkside!

Kilala (Dec 21, 2004)

BUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Cacau (Dec 25, 2004)

GO KIRBY KILL!!! MWAAHAHAHAHA!!!

Kilala (Jan 8, 2005)

Again... BUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! X3

omg

Kenshin (Dec 12, 2004)

dis is lik the best drawlin i ever idd

7 comments – latest 4:

Nightmare (Dec 12, 2004)

I want to kill it because it is sooo cute.

ILoveKenshin (Dec 12, 2004)

Wow, how scarily cute! XD

davincipoppalag (Dec 12, 2004)

Lol cute sayo.. cute

Knockoff (Dec 13, 2004)

Omg like dis is the best drawlin you ever idd.

southpark

pug106 (Dec 12, 2004)

i love southpark

4 comments – latest 4:

inatyrb (Dec 12, 2004)

haha... that makes me wanna draw kenny! hehe.. i love kenny, hes da bestest!

davincipoppalag (Dec 12, 2004)

Let's kill him!! lol

Knockoff (Dec 12, 2004)

This is almost as good as a pile of junk!

Pantera (Dec 12, 2004)

lol, looks just like Kyle, good job :)

OMFG J-Rocker O_+

Maiko (Dec 12, 2004)

yah, i was bored, started drawing, it turned into a woman, so i made it a J rocker! yaay
and if he was real he'd prollieh be part of a band called something grotesque like, Dying Child or 50 Hung Crows, or something french like......er..poulet :D (knows no french) yay hooray for stereotypical J rockers <:D
oh...i forgot his billions of lip/nose/ear/eyebrow/nipple/thingie piercings O_O;

9 comments – latest 4:

Ko (Dec 12, 2004)

Visual Kei bands rawk :D

zippy (Dec 12, 2004)

this is not good this is great no it is not great it is wonderful!!!!!

Knockoff (Dec 12, 2004)

So sexy, so so sexy.

Xodiak (Dec 12, 2004)

He looks sexy, Xod will say she is a flat-chested girl. >:)
|XOD|

eye ball

pug106 (Dec 12, 2004)

how hard are eyes to draw!!

2 comments – latest 2:

Knockoff (Dec 12, 2004)

Like i no!

silvercoyote (Dec 12, 2004)

Actually, I have lots of fun with eyes.

Public Boards/Intermediate

*M*

staci (Dec 12, 2004)

hghghghghg h g

9 comments – latest 4:

firetu (Dec 12, 2004)

Ah, this is very nice. Though, I think certain aspects of it could have blended better, like the transition from the chin to the lower lip. But eh, I'm one to talk. Heh. Nice drawing.

TaCO (Dec 13, 2004)

O.O You Drew that fast for a computer pic!!!!!!!!
And Great pic!!!!!!!!

sincity (Dec 13, 2004)

Great pic as always, and in 32 mins. !! I luffs it, all of it. :}

Aubrey (Dec 13, 2004)

Very nice for sure.