looking good =D >:3

the eye reminds me of chrono 8D

I think using pen would bring out your art so much more.
And there's nothing wrong with being obsessed with cat people XD

I love the purple highlights in the air

The purple highlights are there because I thought the hair was too boring without them XP

GORGEOUS I adore the clothes...the way they fade to yellow...I'm SO JEALOUS <3

Yes, the chin is a bit too pointy.

I wouldn't notice these things if people didn't tell me. )':

I think it's really cute ^_^ but it's ok to notice these things. it may help you for the next time you draw something. btw, the colors are really pretty^^ it's truly adorable.

I love the colors and the cuteness in this :3

this turned out great aaron^^

woah, 15 versions! :O

You should use a different applet than PaintBBS. I would suggest Lascaux Sketch, but some people find Shi Painter better, since it's from the makers of PaintBBS. You should use layers to put the lineart in one layer, coloring in another, and in the third layer the background. That pretty much eliminates the need for the fill tool, and ultimately those pesky white spots. :3

PaintBBS is pretty simple to use, and can produce some pretty nifty graphics (See; Everdream), but better starting applets would be Shi-painter, or Shi-painter Pro. Lascaux is another excellent applet, but may be more confusing at first.
Other than layering problems, you may want to work on proportions and symmetry a little more. The arms are different lengths, and one ear is much larger than the other. The head seems very big, but it could just be the style. The neck also dominates the shoulders a little too much, in fact, the neck is almost as thick as the torso. That could be considered a problem.

Don't worry though, you'll soon get the hang of things, try observing realistic proportions (IE, not Anime) to get a better feel of human anatomy. In a.. non-dirty sense.

What I did to get the hang of proportion was to see how others drew it, or look at myself in the mirror and draw what I saw.

Yeah, she looks pretty cute :)

I think the chin is a little offcenter though o.O Could just be the angle.

The lineart could use some cleaning up, but lineart can be pretty hard sometimes.

the neck is very small....i think that's all...the hair is nice

Really? xD... How come i never knew that, well that makes so much more sense O_O;;; hehe, maybe i'll do that now XD actually use it for the dropper... :)

Now 'that' was great! I think this is for more than just Natsuna..._{like 'me'...THANKS!}

wow thanks this is gonna help me loads thanks for giving me the link to this ^^^

great job ! ^^^^^

(^,^) Yay!..Omg, that Zigzagoon is SO CUTE!

Ahaha this is soo coooll :D I'd be too lazy to do this~ :D

Well, lazy or not, your art beats the crap outta mine :P

Xiau-Pshhhh Yeah right.....I draw like a blind guy compared to you..........With no hands.......o__o

Hrrm.. A suggestion if I may? Both wings look like they are on the same side.. you should draw the left wing joint beside and attached to the left forward shoulder to make it look like the wings are on separate sides of the body.. Again, Just a suggestion..