oo, good idea. And thanks for the comments.

now that I checked, it seems to busy when it's really small. >.>

This looks awesome. Everything is perfect. Good job!

The textures on this are really cool. Very creepy. And I like the teeth. They always give me so much trouble, but you did them very well. It looks almost like a photomanipulation.

o ya i forgot >.<

I don't believe that :(

why?

This is simply the best beginner painting I've seen so far!

This looks great! love the background ;)

While I -do- like it, I have a couple of suggestions.

1. I HIGHLY suggest using the "Pen" tool in Shi. If you decide to use Lascaux next time, check the "anti-alias" box. Your lines won't be so scratchy!

2. Use darker shadows and HIGHLIGHTS. It will really bring you picture to life!

However, I do like the non-shading on the black shirt. Very cool. <3

^___^ absolutely love it. People are so obsessed with the anti-alias-ness. I love pixelly stuff. (thats what my art looks like anyways) anyways, love it! (again)

I love it a lot when it looks like that. it gives it a certain unique quality.

Yaya! :3 Awesome coloring H-chan X3

Beautiful colouring! The hair looks perfect.

Yes, but what could be improved without losing the feel of the piece. Saying it is not good enough is exactly the same as saying it is not of intermediate quality, an opinion with no helpful comments to back it up.

A helpful comment would be something like "the shadows could use more depth"

I know that there are some very good artists on these boards, and I would appreciate some constructive comments.

I wrote something long, but I accidently went back a page while writing it.. Basically, the picture is small. Small pictures are good as long as they have detail. Allthe buildings/walls lack textures and detail. The fence/buildings would probably be just as dark as the person since the light is coming from behind. Maybe a street light by the person would make it look better.

Thanks for the comments hideyourface :)

I was trying for a the world outside your windows type of thing, with the shadowy nature and fuzziness. The person is not supposed to be a person, but rather a shadow of the past... Obviously I was unable to portray this meaning with my drawing. I will give some though as to how to better get that point across.

Too bad the long post was lost, I would have really enjoyed seeing it.

Thanks again, and if anybody else has some comments I'd really like to hear them.

I like her necklance. (<---- did i write it right?)

almost val, its necklace ^^
hahaha!! yoda and chibi usa!! lmfao!!

She looks like an elf or fairy girl... Xod loves them! I wish they were real. <:)
|XOD|

The Shines on the hair stand out to me...Its a neat look too, with the just red and white, which I don't think I've seen you use before.

Oh oh oh...check this out...."This boy has skills!" You know that's what women want too...Skills...haha good old N. Dynomite.

http://www.fearsome-oekaki.com/pics/572.png

I like this face. Red is a great color, is it not?

red is one of my favorites. a grand color indeed.

yep you are the Queen of Sky..there's no question! also been browsin through a bunch of yer cowboy art..excellent, excellent!

nice sky-it almost rivals Icats' skies. Very nice effect

Beautiful. The bright colors of the sky contrast nicely with the dark earthtones of the hills and cross, which also makes the girls in the white dress stand out. Nicely done :D