The arms are slightly too short, and she overall looks very stiff. The coloring could be cleaner, and some shading would be nice. Don't worry, you'll get better with practice.

This style reminds me of someone that got banned here. *hmmm.*

*giggles* Hmm. Anger management Dangerous_punk?
Yes Gothic, do "Shout up"; T'is superior to shouting down. Typos are not cool.

But she (=gothic) is right, this could stand some improvement. Though the food is rather -vicious- looking, which is good.

Like I said on your other picture, shading is good, it makes a picture better, and more worthwhile.
Oekaki shi-painter has a wonderful tool called the Pen. Take advantage of its majestic line-art superpowers. K? ^_^
The food also has cute feet.

Also I would suggest, maybe, starting out with smaller images and then working your way up through the sizes. But you know, wh'ever.
Maybe I shouldn't mention this but, It doesn't seem like you are using layers, because with layers you wouldn't need that ugly white line next to the food/monster/thing. I won't explain layers because I'll mix it all up; it would be better for you to ask someone else ^_^;;

Also the breasts seem a little... freaky. That's really one heck of a bra she's got on and I would ask for a refund of the purchase price if I were her.

I'm also agreeing with RIKG. Deja vu. *shrugs* I've got a suspicious nature.
But I do applaud you for spending over half an hour on this. ... *applause*

*shuffles away with a cheery wave*

Woo, look. I can be an asshole as well! I don't need to listen to anyone else because I'm better than they are! I don't need to use correct grammar or need to spell words right. I can suck because I suck. I think punks are cool, and that I can catagorize people stereotypically. Look! Someone wearing black with spiked straps! A punk!

Have mercy on me, Mary and Joseph. Dangerous_Punk? You make me sick. People are trying to make your pictures better by giving off advice and criticism, but all your do it shot at them with harsh words. How very inconsiderate. How about not receiving ANY comments at all? How about having people ignore your pictures? I know I will...

I hope everyone knows by now that this is a phoney. This my friend is definitlyi dragongirl., O wait The last time when she had her second acount I called he dragon girl and she said that she was her sister, so dangerous punk must be her cousin.

Hmm. Okay. I award myself for being first to flame here. Congratulations to those who actually commented/criticized on the picture and not the person/people.. and now it's locked for the rest being pointless.

That gumball sorta looks like his eye. And since he has one eye closed does it mean it IS his eye? 0_o

ooo... that's cool. I like the gum and the wyw iz cool! it;s a shinie yellow! ^^

wooooootttttttt....... great stuff, hakkai..... your mad skillz are da bomb....

good movie....i have the soundtrack.....nice job ^-^

So cute..good movie too...

back for Halloween

Doesn't that hurt after a while? ow. o_x

You should try harder on your first pic. What would people think? -.-;
Welcome BTW 8D

Um I would'nt be talking gothic,. Anyways welcome.

Not 100% correct. The rest of you made stupid comments toward me. ;x I can hear all the snickering from Mazi and cackling from you.

Oh, I said 'adorable'. Unless you find that offensive. Which is highly likely, because...well, you're you.

Lol, that's totally cool. I think it'z very coot! ^^