Yes, with that I agree... both the legs are off in terms of what the human body is capable of... There's no way to bend them like that, or for them to be that high... OK, thanks a lot, Gigandas! I really appreciate it! n____n

Ah, the neck, I didn't even notice! T__T Thanks, though!

well yeah, that and the flat looking body, the giant neck, and the large forearm. Where the legs are now make it seem as if the upper leg is much too short, and the lower is much too long.

But how do you suggest on changing it hide, that's what she's asking.

For me it's the arm. I assume it's pushed behind her? Though it would be smaller to show distance it's far too small. It needs beefing up. From the shoulder to her elbow to her wrist. It would taper as it gets farther back but the way it is now it seems too... sticklike. Especially in comparison to the rest of her body. Thicken it up a bit (including her hand,) and I think it'll be alright.

As for her legs both fore legs need to be lowered. As it is now the thighs would only be half as long then they normally would be. If we saw her knee it would be near the blue of the Description strip window. We'd only see a bit of her left leg. We would see the whole of her right leg. It needs to be shortened, only half the calf showing, in the perspective her right boot would look shorter than her right because of the angle.

And as for her chest, even flat chested there would be a suggestion of form by way of the shoulder, curving out to where the chest is, then of course curving to the stomache. (I hope that makes sense.) Best ref's to use I think are cliff jumpers or sky divers. They come closest to bending like this.

I hope you take it as suggestions. Overall it's a great composition and you'll know what to do on your next piece. In art it's an ever growing process of learning and bettering yourself.

Just don't change the colors. They're like a wonderful eye candy. *<>*

I agree with Garnet, the tones are simply stunning..and i love how you made everything b/w but left her eyes blue ~ w ~ preeety

This is so beautiful. She's so creepy and odd and weird but yet...I want to reach out my arms to comfort her in her seeming sadness. And brush aside her bangs to look into her eyes. You are a very inspiring artist.

this is effing awesome.. i love this pencil style.

wonderful as always O)

Wow. Very beautiful eyes.