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It's alright, but I think the lighting on the face could use some work (like I mentioned on another piece). More contrast, "lighter lights, darker darks."
Also the face seems somewhat deformed to me, almost cat-like. Maybe the jaw/mouth comes out too far. If you wanted to fix it, you could try moving the neck and back of the jaw forward rather than the whole face back.

staci (Jan 22, 2004)
drawn in 56 min

i dont want to mess with it anymore

Look (Jan 30, 2004)

I like the flying hair, and her expression is so sad!

Falling

ToraNeko (Jan 21, 2004)

Here I'm falling once more
What perpose do I fall for?
Am I already lost?
Have I paied the cost?
I'll just close me eyes
But is death my true prize?
I want to keep going on
Live the life I've come upon
And so I shall, and so I will
With this power my heart does fill
I fall to unknowing lands
But at least I know my plans

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marcello (Jan 22, 2004)

Actually, not quite. Once she gets fast enough for air drag to push it up, it'd push it quite close to the body, at least at the very top of her head. But it's kinda fluffy :)

ToraNeko (Jan 22, 2004)

I kinda wanted this floating falling effect >.< Oh well, I try. The line art came out really scetchy, but it was kind of full with the Background

fleeting_memory (Jan 22, 2004)

well it just looks like she just starting to fall-and that what the poem suggests too...awsome idea and great draw.

Soshell (Jan 22, 2004)

this kinda scared me i didnt expect to see someone upside down! its a cool idea though :)

Lynx

stellarbeams (Jan 22, 2004)

I started out with the intention of drawing a mummified cat (don't ask) but somehow it evolved along the way. I must say I like this much better.

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RabidMalikFanGirl (Jan 23, 2004)

My favorite Ice Hockey team ^^ lol. Nice fur texture!

ambiguous.alkadette.amnesiac. (Jan 23, 2004)

heh what a cunning expression. it looks so graceful and regal, but somehow sly. Very feline... very good.

Knockoff (Jan 25, 2004)

Thats really nice.
Yea the fur texture is really nice.
I like the colors.

swim

thug (Jan 22, 2004)

purple-my favorite color

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staci (Jan 22, 2004)

yikes! you are just crankin them out..i like the highlights on his hair and his back is magnificent.

sal (edited Jan 22, 2004)

really cool pic... wish i could highlite and shade like that..lol

Some Knights Don't Save The World

strangeoid (Dec 30, 2003)

Her tears flowed freely as the rain began to pour. The water seemed to desecrate his body, dampening the dark battle field and washing away the endless blood. He died a brave death, but she wished that he had stayed to protect her, and not gone to protect his king.

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strangeoid (Jan 22, 2004)

Toan- Yeah, I was fighting with the bg for a long time, and I just sort of gave up on it. I could give it a little more detail... maybe tomorrow, if I'm still home sick.
Thanks for commenting, guys! This is definitely my favorite of all the pics I've drawn.

angelbate (Jan 22, 2004)

lovely, i like the epic qualities of it, i think due to its deep field of vision. nice colors and the rain is a nice touch.

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Jan 23, 2004)

It's raining arrows!! I love it! This is wonderful, can't find a single thing wrong with it - don't you dare change it!

Knockoff (Jan 28, 2004)

Its done.!
Wow, This is very nice.
The rain is cool. I like the flag, and the shading.!!!

night

thug (Jan 22, 2004)

still learning

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Childlike_Vampire (Jan 22, 2004)

This is really awesome, and it really does look real. It looks like a prison wall to me, lol. Very nice!

staci (Jan 22, 2004)

how lonely. if you are still in the learning phase then i cant wait to see what you can do a couple weeks from now.

thug (Jan 22, 2004)

thanks every one...I'm having fun

davincipoppalag (Feb 11, 2004)

Nicely done.. this is reminiscent of an Edward Hopper picture.. the lighting is great.. love it

Venting

supermonkey (Jan 21, 2004)

Blarghharhar

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Childlike_Vampire (Jan 22, 2004)

That is one kick ass bg, I was noticing it yesterday but I didn't want to comment until I saw what you were doing with those yellow lines. That creature looks hella scary too! Awesomely. ^^

strangeoid (Jan 22, 2004)

Yeah, I was kind of afraid of the yellow lines yesterday, but it looks really cool now. I lurve the angle. The lighting in the hallway rocks, too.

sal (Jan 23, 2004)

really cool pic.. the background ownz

IkariIreuL (Jan 6, 2005)

Looks like he´s catching a peeper :o