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1) I'm sorry I offended you Mr. Anthony ... I'll try never to do that again, thank you for saying it to me ...

2) thanX mrs ~unwritten_law_girl~ ^_^ well, the hair is just about the only thing I like... I liked it better as lineart though ^_^ you saved my day, just so you know *hugs*

whitebunny1063 (Jul 5, 2006)

I like how you drew him.

Speak

lycene (Jul 15, 2005)

Anybody have any ideas for the body? I'm having trouble.

Reference can be found at: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20616957

Done for now, because I can't modify it anymore and I really want to keep the comments you all gave me. I'll delete it later if I ever am able to finish the other version.

7 comments – latest 4:

Renuar (Jul 16, 2005)

hey Iycene, you've done a great job so far. if it helps, i have some advise; Right nostril needs enlarging (keep the lips in proportion to the nose). Right cheek needs decreasing, and last but not least...amplify the eyes, make them bigger koz they real sweet to look at.

p3ndragon (Jul 16, 2005)

Don't use the burn tool. Please.
But amazing picture. Colors are great. I can't wait until it's done!

Gigandas (Jul 16, 2005)

Here's some more things to look into:
The face is too wide from left to right (pull it inwards), left end of nose (from our view) needs to be pulled over to the left more so that it's partially past the tear ductof the eye, lower the upper right side of her lip (pull left corner up as well), pull chin in, use more darks on the makeup around the eyes, pull the entire mouth over to the bottom left side of the face, widen "her" left nostril. And most importantly, enlarge the eyes a bit and then shift "her" left eye below her right eye (right now it's backwards, and it's throwing off the angle of her face).
Hope that helps some...

davincipoppalag (Jul 18, 2005)

Now isnt that wierd! This submitted in two places! how very odd

samurai about to get owned.

hideyourface (Jul 1, 2005)

somebody help make this picture pretty ;o. or else move it to beginner.. I dont caree.

4 comments – latest 4:

darkshadow (Jul 1, 2005)

i like it so far i can see it now i say go for it

hideyourface (Jul 1, 2005)
drawn in 26 min

will have to do background next..

Zack (Jul 1, 2005)

Looks pretty slick, nice poses.

hideyourface (edited Jul 16, 2005)
drawn in 18 min

finally this thing is out of my studio.

edit: I forgot their shadows :(

Teen assassins

Truearashi (Jul 6, 2005)

Tane from teen assassins.
This time he's in a magasine, no wonder since he's so damn loaded U_U

4 comments – latest 4:

Truearashi (Jul 7, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 4 min

laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazy
an ow boy, is the timer off *lmao*

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 7, 2005)

ooo wow that looks so cool the dark red backgrouns really made it stand out.. heh, it sort of looks gothic but thats really cool to me^_^i wanna see it finished XD

Truearashi (Jul 16, 2005)
drawn in 37 min

finally done, and yes: I hate this pic' BIG TIME ...

hideyourface (Jul 16, 2005)

It's not bad. You just need to work on your anatomy a bit, and wrinkles and folds in clothing.

Alpine A310

hideyourface (Jul 15, 2005)

ref: http://www.planeterenault.com/alpine/images/a310/v6-groupe4.jpg

cars are hard :(. Any advice?

5 comments – latest 4:

davincipoppalag (Jul 16, 2005)

I like your car. You fixed the smoke pretty well..seems small parts of the details should be a little blurred to add to the feeling of motion the smoke behind it implies is there.

hideyourface (Jul 16, 2005)

well, since Im lazy, I decided it was a picture taken by a camera that didn't motion blur. but I do suppose some part could be softened a bit..

HunterKiller_ (Jul 17, 2005)

Damn good. Wish i could draw cars.

emmamommalag (Jul 17, 2005)

This is really cool.

Sun-dance

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)

@_@ i still hve to color the feathers on her head band.. this is just a saftysave..

6 comments – latest 4:

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)

technical arn't u.. well i cant really help the way i draw.. its just a habit and habits are hard to change.. anyway thanks for the comments

hideyourface (Jul 16, 2005)

well, you've changed the way you drew from when you were little, no? It's not changing your style, but improving your basic drawing skills.

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)

hmm... that's true, i can see my improvment when i go through my user board.

MidnightRaven99 (Jul 16, 2005)

This is very nice. I like the soft colors, its very pretty

innocent..

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 15, 2005)

safty-save

3 comments – latest 4:

jigglybuttmonky (Jul 15, 2005)

ooohhh i like this picture its pretty!!!it caught my eye *.*

oikitsumaru (Jul 15, 2005)

I really like the black and silver hair. Its sooo very neat!

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)
drawn in 7 min

7 MINUTES!? woah..

Xodiak (Jul 16, 2005)

Fantastic background, I love it! >:D
|XOD|

Ice

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)

just a random character i thought of.. i pretty much got the idea from D.N.Angel. .. i was reading the manga and i saw a character in it i liked.. i didnt try to make it look like her so i changed it around.. u should know what i mean if u have read vol.7

3 comments – latest 4:

solve (Jul 16, 2005)

20 MINUTES? DAMN THATS VERY GOOD CONSIDERING THE TIME. I LIKE THE MUTED COLORS IN BOTH THE EYE AND HAIR, SUITS THE NAME PERFECTLY.

ALSO I DIDNT REALIZE CAPS BUTTON WAS ON BUT I DONT FEEL LIKE ERASING THIS ALL AND RETYPING, SORRY.

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)
drawn in 35 min

i'm done.. my layers confused me so i had to work with what i had~_~

sincity (Jul 16, 2005)

very nice. :}

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)

thanx^_^

captain h

solve (Jul 16, 2005)

got a tablet finally! orgasmo.

4 comments – latest 4:

Renuar (Jul 16, 2005)

ha, solve got a tablet now...hmm..im expecting big things...this is great. look forward to seeing more.

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)

same here, i love your art^_^

Xodiak (Jul 16, 2005)

I like Captain... how was his name... Harlot? Hooker? Hentai? Something starting with H definately. Very nice! I like the mouthless alien lady in the cartoon as well, she is so sexy. Awesome drawing! >:D
|XOD|

sincity (Jul 16, 2005)

Cool Congrats on the pad. :}