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well.. the eyes are too far aparts, you shouldn't shade at the top of the nose, there should be more shading underneath the nose, lips, eyebrows, and neck, and the neck should be straight, not curved.

But not bad..

nekodesu (Aug 21, 2005)

I suggest you use a reference until you can draw without looking at them. It'll take a while though. Just look up something on google or something. But this isn't a bad start :)

p3ndragon (Aug 23, 2005)

Like Nekodesu said, start by using a reference. The eyes are a little far apart and large. The nose is pretty good, but needs more shape. I don't think this should be in the intermediate board.

Water Petals

Urei-sama (Aug 21, 2005)

oikitsumaru inspired me to draw somthing...

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Animegirl250 (Aug 21, 2005)

Nice colring and everything but...I think the nose is too big.

Urei-sama (Aug 21, 2005)

I agree

Xodiak (Aug 21, 2005)

Xod likes the big noses... Nice people. I also like the style in which the people are drawn in the panel and the sparkly effects, they remind me or romance comics. <:)
|XOD|

Koneko-sama (Aug 21, 2005)

There is nothing wrong with the big noses, just like there is nothing wrong with NO noses in the cutesy anime style.

>_< ::fury::

Speak

lycene (Jul 17, 2005)

Bah. Stupid background. It's supposed to be the color of the board, but it didn't work, as you can see. I also switched painting styles halfway through. Can you tell?

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Xodiak (edited Aug 22, 2005)

I think his hand reaches upwards indeed. It almost looks like he holds a camera above him and takes a picture of himself. The perspective of the ground makes me think so. This is an awesome drawing, it has the feeling of a painting on canvas but it still is extremely realistic. And the face is so sweet! Excellent artwork. <:)
|XOD|

lycene (edited Aug 22, 2005)

Actually, I think the photographer did take the picture of herself, so her arm would be reaching upwards and that would account for the perspective. So sorry for not posting the reference, I had put it on originally, but since the pics got seperated during a saving glitch, I forgot about it. Here it is: Linkage!
Ooh, and it's a she, I believe. Otherwise, a very pretty boy.
And, Raiknii, thank you so much for your nice memo. If only everyone here were as thoughtful as you.

Xodiak (Aug 22, 2005)

You really made her great... Especially the shirt and the folds! |:)
|XOD|

LisaAnne (Aug 25, 2005)

The lip position is great, and the realistic texture of the hair is also eye catching.

me <3 spagetti

voodoobunny (Aug 21, 2005)

I love spagettiiih!

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voodoobunny (Aug 21, 2005)

Awww....Thanks.

renire (Aug 21, 2005)

Reminds me of Teranee off of W.I.T.C.H, cool pic, love the hair and the way you have positioned the face ^_^

voodoobunny (Aug 21, 2005)

teeheehee, I don't have blue/violet hair.
but the hairstyle kinda reminds her's.

KH44N (Aug 21, 2005)

Nice pic. I like the highlights on the hair, and the background looks cool.

blue dragonfly

lamamo (Aug 18, 2005)

I tried my best but I can't get the top wing right, other than that i think it looks alright.

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Anna (Aug 22, 2005)

Hey!! Good stuff. Love how you have it colored. Pretty!

Dagan (Aug 22, 2005)

My brother(not Derrick) killed a Dragonfly with his knife yesterday that looked just like that one. It was pretty awesome. Anyways... awesome pic. keep it up.

HunterKiller_ (Aug 22, 2005)

That's beautiful. Looks like a poetic book illustration.

Animegirl250 (Aug 22, 2005)

This should be in advanced. It's wonderful!

My friend/singers tattoo idea.

AuschwitzBurns (Jul 18, 2005)

I'm getting rather frustrated with this project. Yet I can't seem to stop working on it for long. HELP!!!!!!!!

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AuschwitzBurns (edited Aug 21, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 14 min

One mic. The crowd is in a chant. ASM they shout, growing more and more impatient as the time grows long. Slowly, a low thunder begins, growing stronger and faster and more furious. Feedback fills the room. The scream of what sounds like a freight train fills their ears. Now they cheer. Thud, thud, thud. The floor shakes. A shadow takes the stage. TOO MANY PEOPLE SCARE ME!

.... Don't ask.

It's as done as it's going to be.

SHIT! Didn't know it was on Advanced board. Fuck it. If you don't think it's worthy, move it.