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Zappo
(May 11, 2006)
i have internet at home now which is great im going to be posting alot more stuff on my deviant art site! tell your friends the doctor is in! |
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Deformed
(May 11, 2006)
My first real attempt at realism.. It's supposed to be Bruce Dickinson in a leather jacket.. I still have a long way to go, but I think i'm doing ok. Any tips would be greatly appreciated.Referance Damn......I suck....
Artiste (May 15, 2006)
This is a pretty good start. It is good that you are working from dark to light.The one major tip that I can give you is that you should paint much larger. It's extremely difficult to create realism on such a small scale. The head should be taking up most, if not all of the canvas size. Working with tiny little brush strokes makes it much too hard to see. Look at some of the good realism paintings on this website. You will see that the subject matter is very simple, and the artists makes full use of the canvas size.
Deformed (May 16, 2006)
Thanks alot, Artiste... I plan to make a bigger one more close up now.....
TaCO (edited May 19, 2006)
Looks goodTry breaking the picture down to it's basic shapes, And then draw it with shapes until you think everthing is in the right place. Now you can start addind detail and value. 1. Block it in 2. work the whole pic at once, don't work on one area more than the rest. 3. detail should be put after blocking in and base values are complete. |
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Roytje
(May 11, 2006)
Finished. Hope you'll like it.Last oekaki for 3 weeks. I have to learn for my exams :(
LisaAnne (May 11, 2006)
The other layer thing is fantastic.
Roytje (May 11, 2006)
Thanks! :)
Sweetcell (May 12, 2006)
I see the tree and leaves but the first thing that I saw was veins on the person/child themselves. It looks like a picture of self reflection. It's stunning. That eye is wonderful.
Roytje (May 13, 2006)
Thank you Sweetcell. |
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Artis_Discipula
(May 10, 2006)
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Artis_Discipula (May 13, 2006)
Thanks for the critique, Axil. I appreciate you putting your time in to look at my art. I probably won't fix it, but now I noticed a few things that I should have realized while I was drawing it. As for the "downplay", I don't know if you noticed, but the original drawing on here was about six minutes. I think that could be called a doodle. I was just too lazy to change the name. So CALM DOWN. :)
Axil62 (May 14, 2006)
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friend (May 14, 2006)
Hottie! Both of them! |
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TRIP
(May 10, 2006)
cannot be themselves
LisaAnne (May 11, 2006)
Very interesting...The colors are cool, yet have warm undertones, which is kind of beautifully conflicted, as is life. I'd say alot of life is being and figuring out who you are. I sort of see energy and octupus tenticles. If you could give some explination, I'd appreciate it.I like the back ground splotchy/organic texture.
JK-Arts (Nov 18, 2007)
The colors are great, and i agree with LisaAnne this is very interesting. |
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AuschwitzBurns
(May 10, 2006)
I really suck.
LisaAnne (May 11, 2006)
At least your trying...Its really not that bad, needs some work, but you'll learn...just keep at it. |
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Kayos
(May 10, 2006)
this was going to be on the contest, but i proctastinated too long so i put it here instead
kuramaandhiei (May 10, 2006)
cool alien! |
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kuramaandhiei
(May 10, 2006)
Ill try to finish.
gore_vision (May 10, 2006)
looks good to me
kuramaandhiei (May 10, 2006)
Thanks alot.just alittle coloring
Finally!
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TaCO
(May 10, 2006)
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xswirvex
(May 2, 2006)
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Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
This is really nice. I love the angled background, makes it such a unique perspective all while the main character is still standing straight up.Although it almost looks like you rushed on coloring parts, like the right arm, [her left] and it almost seems as too much of the abdomin is dark. But other then that, this is really nice, so keep the good work up :]
hideyourface (May 3, 2006)
the space between her legs is too wide, and her torso is too thin. The shading also lacks definition and the right shape.
Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
Mm, yup, now that hideyourface points those things out, makes me see how the legs are too far apart. And they almost seem to big for how wide her upper body is, but I guess it depends on the person you look at ;\I still like it :D
GOODBYE (May 4, 2006)
adding to more constructive critisizm her arms as well as her neck seem a bit wide. It looks like the left hand is not existant but that the wrist is attached to the hip. But I do like the ove exaggerated shading, i like the work put into it :) good job |
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