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Night Sky and a Girl
raenboe
(Apr 23, 2003)
I stink at profiles... Oh well... C&C appreciated!
Kazukie (edited Apr 23, 2003)
This is good, just a suggestion for her face though. Maybe if you brought the nose down a little lower. Try running the side of your finger from your forehead to the tip of your nose then down to your lips. Try and get the feel of it. =] It should go in more, right across from her eyes. Hope that helps. ^____^;;
raenboe (edited Apr 23, 2003)
Thanks for the help, Kazukie! I think I'll try another!
darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)
the nose and forehead suck, as does the background... sorry!
raenboe (edited Apr 24, 2003)
Yeah. I didn't spend too much time on the bg. My mom was forcing me to get off. I forgive u, darkk! |
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raenboe
(Apr 24, 2003)
Well, I like how it turned out! Except the hair...hmm... C&C Appreciated!
SandyDexHamtaro (edited Apr 24, 2003)
She needs a little more forehead and a little less upper lip, but I think it's good the way it is! I do believe this is your 2nd attempt at realism?
darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)
good for a first and second try, but still a tad bit off.... the forehead should not protrude so much, as is the case with the nose... the lips should be smaller, and the neck should join with the jaw where the jaw is a straight line.... do you know what i am saying? i dunno if i actually am expressing this in the right way.... hmmmm.... raenboe, stick to your regular type of art.
raenboe (edited Apr 24, 2003)
Ok. Thanks darkk_angel! I think I will stick to my regular type! Realism isn't my cup of tea.EDIT: Allison, yeah I guess you're right. But this is my first intentional realism pic! lol |
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6 comments
– latest 4:
ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 10, 2003)
Lol! That's really cute! Finish it!!
RabidMalikFanGirl (edited Mar 10, 2003)
Lol reminds me of what happend at school today... Finish it!!!
Tesia-chan (edited Apr 7, 2003)
Hurray! I LOVE Love Hina!
Ari (edited Apr 24, 2003)
Awesome! This looks like professional anime... cool... |
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Ellu
(Apr 20, 2003)
I am in lurve wiff Oekaki BBS! :DThis turned out better than I expected and I really really like it. :D Especially her hair is great. I miss summer. *ish happi happi with the picture* :DD~ edit: Now it has pupils.. >8B
Azelrellon (edited Apr 20, 2003)
It's only that I find it very difficult to shade unless the "Increment" thingy is set to something, is all.Otherwise, it's good. (Though lineart could be a bit easier? I dunno)
marcello (edited Apr 20, 2003)
Are you using opacity or flow?
Ari (edited Apr 22, 2003)
AWESOMENESS!!! This is COOL!!! I love how you did her shirt.
darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)
very kool, but her right eye is a tad bit messed..... |
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CessaJ13
(Apr 23, 2003)
I had made a drawing in my sketchbook and then i decided to draw in here, except I wasn't sure it would come out good.
CessaJ13 (edited Apr 23, 2003)
Uhm...you have to maximize it in order to see it clearly...sorry about that! :)
Kazukie (edited Apr 23, 2003)
Cool, you did a good job with *most* of the folds on her dress. =P
Tesia-chan (edited Apr 24, 2003)
Neat. I like the dress.
darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)
i love the hair... cant wait till you finish! |
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Turtlebuster
(Apr 22, 2003)
yup. although... this should probably be in practice now that i think of it.
SandyDexHamtaro (edited Apr 23, 2003)
What is it?
RabidMalikFanGirl (edited Apr 23, 2003)
TEKKEN 2!!!! Ready! GO!!!!!
darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)
wow.... fighting figures! |
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Kazukie
(Mar 16, 2003)
Don't worry, this *should* look a lot better when I'm done. ^^;; C&C is still welcome at this point though. Any tips on things I should change before I go back and finish?||EDIT 1|| Ok I added the dark blue background, finished the girl and colored her in. All I have to do is finish up the background, and shade/highlight the girl and add any textures or whatever.. C&C would be *really* helpful you guys! ^^;;;; ||EDIT 2|| Ok I think I'm done now.. ^^;; Tell me what you think!!! Make sure to refresh so you can see the finished product.. =P
Kazukie (edited Mar 16, 2003)
Ehhh.. It's really bugging me that I covered up the brunette's nose... I'm thinking about making some kind of characters about these two and making some little bio's or something, just for the heck of it. =]
Fin_beast (edited Mar 17, 2003)
cool
Anly (edited Mar 17, 2003)
This is really good, it takes ages to get that transparancy look *believe me I know* and I think the stars do just that. But she looks so sad ;__; *goes off to cry*
raenboe (edited Apr 24, 2003)
This is my favorite of yours yet! I love the face in tha sky! Nifty, yet beautiful! |
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Kazukie
(Apr 13, 2003)
This is taking *forever*. I'm ordering a new pen for my tablet soon though so I can use it again! =D I'll finish this later. BTW: I think the animation looks really cool. ^^;;;
cherikit-chan (edited Apr 16, 2003)
I like this style it makes her look even more cuter than before!!!
Ari (edited Apr 17, 2003)
Tablets are about the size of an ordinary mouse-pad, maybe a little smaller.Cute pic, Kazukie!
Kazukie (edited Apr 23, 2003)
Nah, tablet's can be really big. Mine's about the size of 4 mouse pad's put together. =]
raenboe (edited Apr 24, 2003)
Whoa this is so kewl! |
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Ellu
(Apr 20, 2003)
n_n
rosalyn (edited Apr 20, 2003)
*hugs bunny* I luv da bunny very much!^^ *hug bunny more* Can i keep da bunny? *beggs on knees*
Ellu (edited Apr 20, 2003)
Okay then. xDD
rosalyn (edited Apr 21, 2003)
Thankies!!!!!*grabs bunny and runs a way* The bunny an di thank you!!! I luv da bunny! ^^ *keeps bunny safe for all time*
Nanibunny (edited Apr 24, 2003)
awwwinness bunnies are awesome!!!!!! . . . hehe i love your pic, its sooooooooo cute!! ^.^ |
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Minitsaru
(Apr 19, 2003)
i'm not really sad... i was just watching a sad movie on flash..... tho it was in jap. but i had my friend translate =)C & C if you wish =) ----{[EDIT]}---- c&c or i cut ur throat!!!!
Minitsaru (edited Apr 21, 2003)
lol thats her arm.... tho now that i look at it it does look like a nose hmmmm lol
Ari (edited Apr 21, 2003)
Very cute!!! She looks just so... so... magna-ish. I like how you did the tears, they look cool!
darkk_angel (edited Apr 22, 2003)
awww!! soooo sad! funny, fin beast... but no, i like this pic! the eyes need whites though... sounds like eggs
Minitsaru (edited Apr 24, 2003)
lol i knew i forgot summathing! my next pic will have the whites in the eyes. and il try and put a hand too =) |
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