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Refrence: A pic in National Geographic

Yeah, the head isn't there. Well I will put it in, this is more a safety save then anything. But please, other then missing limbs please critque this so I can improve! (and I hope it's fine I posted it on intermediate. ^-^)

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crowquill (Aug 31, 2005)
drawn in 6 min

safty save

crowquill (Aug 31, 2005)
drawn in 12 min

safty savce

crowquill (Aug 31, 2005)
drawn in 13 min

saftu save

crowquill (Sep 1, 2005)
drawn in 14 min

So I think this is done, unless I decide to do the bakround more (which I might) but I'm starting 8th grade and I don't think I'll have time to really finish this.

From the Depths...

method3 (Aug 31, 2005)

Tilt your head to the right.

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method3 (Aug 31, 2005)
drawn in 26 min

Meh, good enough to keep I guess.

davincipoppalag (Aug 31, 2005)

This is a very interesting effect you have created. Alternately I seem to be looking down from a high building..and at a mine shaft..(I know I'm wierd)

Nightmare (Aug 31, 2005)

Hrm. When I tilt my head to the right, it looks like I am looking inbetween two cabins down a large cavern, or mine shaft like Poppa suggested.

metaphysical mutant

brainspiller83 (Aug 31, 2005)

eh?

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davincipoppalag (Aug 31, 2005)

Lol that's the guy that makes someone crave pizza when they should be eating salad! I know him well! Great piccy

Renuar (Aug 31, 2005)

Reminds me of that mutant guy from 'Total Recall' � nice work.

KH44N (Aug 31, 2005)

It looks a little scary. But great work! ^__^

where did you go?

anangelmyself24 (Aug 31, 2005)

Meh it was just the pressure sensitive tablet practise sorry if it's spam >.< I think it looks quite pretty even so *grins hopefully*

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brainspiller83 (Aug 31, 2005)

it looks pretty good! :) looks like it was done with ink using a paint brush! definately awesome stuff! not spam at all! this rawks!

Gigandas (Aug 31, 2005)

This looks like it was done with an Oshuuji brush, and instead of writing Japanese characters with it, you chose to draw a picture instead. Brainspiller's right, this rocks :).

Urei-sama (Aug 31, 2005)

oh pretty... its so diffrent than what im use to seeing

Sexy sports

anangelmyself24 (Aug 31, 2005)

Meh I hate backgrounds, I gave up >.< this waws an extremely quick drawing as you can see, just felt a little bored. My lineart as usual is complete rubbish lol but I'm working on it ;) heh. constructve criticism would be great. Hmm this is only my second oekaki and my colouring is terrible too lol XD damn this would almost make me never want to oekaki every again lol :P

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LisaAnne (Aug 31, 2005)

First of all, I wouldn't say its rubbish at all.
Second, I'm not too good at computer art, or have knowledge of anime, but here are things that might help you: I'm sorry if you already know them.

-Layers...if you use the layers, you can often save alot of work, and it might help you with the background issue as well.
-Sometimes using a thicker "pen" in diameter can help smooth the lines out a little, just in the fact that they can reach more angled, or partial pixels.

Anyway, I rather like the pose she has, and it looks like you do a good job coloring as well...keep trying, because you seem skilled.

davincipoppalag (Aug 31, 2005)

I'm not a big anime fan, but I think this is a pretty good drawing. I don't use Shi-painter but what LisaAnne said sounds right to make it better. Keep at it.

xiau (Aug 31, 2005)

I love the pose! The lineart is alot better this time! Kudos! I love the coloring ^_^

Gigandas (Aug 31, 2005)

I'd say that you should make her arms skinnier (maybe by a third?) to match her body, and pull in the angle of her back (I think it would look about right if maybe you pulled the back in to where that green lining ends (right below 'her' left arm). Other than that, her face looks pretty well done. Good luck if you choose to revise this :).

blergle

thesolarwinds (Jul 21, 2005)

i think the hair needs more darks.... erm..... *sigh*

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thesolarwinds (Aug 31, 2005)
drawn in 5 min

yay! done!

nekodesu (Aug 31, 2005)

Lovely :) I love the fairness of her skin and you did a great job on her eye. But the nose could be a little longer.

renire (edited Sep 1, 2005)

I love her eye too, this looks amazing. I like her tattoo alot!

thesolarwinds (Aug 31, 2005)

yes.. but then i was trying not to make the face too long....

Hey there baby

anangelmyself24 (Aug 31, 2005)

Meh just trying something new with colouring and linearting, meh it failed miserably lol. Comments and criticism please. For some reason I like her eyes and uniform and well the rest is just....meh!

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xiau (Aug 31, 2005)

I agree, the eyes and the uniform are great! I love the expression and pose, too! And the shine on the hair is very pretty ^_^