Great job, Urei-sama (even though it's not done yet)! I love the flowing hair (as I mentioned before), as well as the eyes and the nose! i also like like the additional lineart and the circle, and I can't find anything to criticize about... yet *evil laugh*. Although the girl might drown in her own hair... *is glared at*. Okay, maybe not *sweatdrops*. Can't wait for the finished product~
*gasp*
OHMYGOD! This is so awesome. I love the mysterious feel and the dark, warm tones. ^_^ And the gold thing in the corner. I'm happy you finally settled on a hair color, and it worked out quite well.
Beth, I never can critisizesomething very well on your art, you know that... but right now the only thing, is that the lips are so...dollish, like a perfect shape, lips aren't perfect, but these are like parallelled all around. thats all...
~*~Kit:.:.
So this is the finished product, huh? I love the hair color (so brilliant red ^_^), and I agree: the face's shading is as near as perfect as it can get... or at least, until I can research more into this criteria, but moving on... I also admire how you colored and drew the golden stream, and the sudden change of the shape really improves your oekaki ^ ^. Plus, the semi-transparent stars circling around it add a nice touch. Yet I can't help agree with Kit, at least a litte... the eyes are great, but the lips (although very good) don't look very natural, and the upper nose line could've been erased, too. However, they are only small details you can improve, and the overall work looks terrific!
WhOa... the girl reallly is going to drown in her hair... *runs away before Urei-sama can attack*
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OHMYGOD! This is so awesome. I love the mysterious feel and the dark, warm tones. ^_^ And the gold thing in the corner. I'm happy you finally settled on a hair color, and it worked out quite well.
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I felt compelled.
Sparklies are fun! *eats the sparkles*
~*~Kit:.:.
WhOa... the girl reallly is going to drown in her hair... *runs away before Urei-sama can attack*