Lips need to be wider and not as parted, though once you widen them, they won't look as open. You may have added more hair on the right side. I'm having a lot of difficulty trying to find things wrong with it technically. Maybe try to smooth it out and it might look better. Also, the colors are a lot brighter, but I'm sure you knew that. I think the angle of the hat might be a bit off, which might throw off other elements. XD I'm squinting my eyes and staring at these side by side. Bby would be able to help you so much... lol. You have a very interesting coloring style when you draw realistically, DoOp.
Don't worry about it. I see a couple small differences but is it really that important to the overall success of this? I say no. This is a wondeful piece. Don't look at it for a few days, and then without looking at the ref, come back to it and you'll probably be surprized at how much you like it.
Theres not a lot that has to be wrong to throw a drawing off, i think youve done a great job.The lips look like they should be a bit higher and the cheek and chin on the left hand side should be a little higher and wider, sometimes if you make changes they are for the worse though, so id probobly just leave it :p
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Your skills <3 omgomg I love the skin, lips, eyes, hair EVERYTHIING. The coloring is awesome.
I <3 this. so much.
I don't know about that, I think you're crazy to think the lips are anything less than perfect.