STILL getting there, i think i will turn in for the night tho, things that need to be done... face, and touch up of the lines
UGH i will work on this tomorrow, tired from running around in circles all day.
there I am done now and the thing that she is holding is a doll with its hair over its face I didn't know what to do with it. And there was a reference used... sorry for the horribleness of it...
Met, you can take as much time as you want. Unlike other places we don't delete entries if they're not done during a certain time. It's perfect becuase then you can really perfect your piece. I've had pieces that took over a year to finish.
Her face looks too assymetrical. I think one because her hair is pulled back so her ear would be showing and it's not there, and her jaw is too masculine. Not being mean but she looks like she had a face lift. If you give her more of a chin that's softer and rounder and added an ear I think this would look better. Just my suggestion you don't have to take it.
No I appreciate the fact that some one here is critical, thank you very much!!! I will keep that in mind, and truly I want people to rip my pieces to shreds with critism...THANKS again
I like this and I know I'll enjoy your art here. I like the left side of her the best...the face, her arm the way it shadows and looks 3-D. It appears to be an illustration in a book that is trying to become real. I like that effect.
hmmm, is she holding a doll or something? i see two little feet under her folded arms... oh wait, nvm. I just read your description on v.6. It looks to me like she's stuffed the doll under her shirt... And I'm with Sweetcell on the comment about the left-side on her face, it's like there's somthing missing. Her look is pretty intense and hard. Maybe it would be better if her hair was hanging loosely closer to her face. I dunno. Looks a bit strange to me. But other than that, you did well on the realistic part of the rest of her.
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Her face looks too assymetrical. I think one because her hair is pulled back so her ear would be showing and it's not there, and her jaw is too masculine. Not being mean but she looks like she had a face lift. If you give her more of a chin that's softer and rounder and added an ear I think this would look better. Just my suggestion you don't have to take it.