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Harmanye (Sep 18, 2003)

Avia Skylance, my T2T ( www.angband.com/towers ) Character! Yay ^_^

Yes, the timer is, as 'they' say, 'Correct'. EEEK.
Please critique; I know I'm over the limit, but it will help me later on next time I draw.
Does anyone recongnize the painting? Eh? No? Drat.

P.S. Also practicing line-art, how am I doing?

-A girl of rogue-like appearance catches your eye, she is obviously a thief of some sort.
Although from the look of her she isn't very skillful, you still feel it would be best to be careful and avoid her.-

Harmanye (Sep 18, 2003)
drawn in 3 hours 43 min

Zinc (Sep 18, 2003)

Critique.. Well, there is something wrong with this picture, but I don't know exactly what. I think it's the road on the background that makes the picture un-proportional (unless it's a hill), but that's a guess. More importantly, the thumb is on the wrong side of her hand (try making that pose irl and you'll see what I mean). As for lineart, it looks great.

P.S. Nifty shading.

Sixelab (Sep 18, 2003)

The road and stuff is done well, its just the perspective, i think, is a bit wrong. I really love how you did her hair and the shading on her shirt, very keen.

Harmanye (Sep 18, 2003)

The road is on a hill actually, but perhaps I made it a bit too steep, ah well... Better next time :) And thanks for the tip about the thumb, I probably wouldn't have noticed that on my own... obvously. Thank you ^_^

Perspective, not my strong point, but I guess it's something I'll have to work more on, Thanks Sixelab

coffeejelly (Sep 18, 2003)

the colouring and shading is good... esp the colouring on the wood :D

dragon_girl (Sep 19, 2003)

wow that is such a nice drawing I love miedevil stuff

Harmanye (Sep 24, 2003)
drawn in 18 min