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accidentalidentity (Nov 9, 2007)
Does anyone have any suggestions on how I can improve this?? This is going to be given to my friend as her birthday gift.
accidentalidentity (Nov 9, 2007)
drawn in 40 min
brenndurdrykkur (edited Nov 15, 2007)
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accidentalidentity (Nov 10, 2007)
Okay, thank you! You're advice is very helpful.
accidentalidentity (Nov 11, 2007)
drawn in 17 min
:3
clover_pocky (Nov 11, 2007)
Getting better - the shadow under her jaw is good - try mixing some purple (very lightly) into the very darkest shadows of her face. Also, her lips need more definition- better than it was before, I can start to see that this is indeed a girl and that she's got some definition to her features - as the other one was very flat. You have the contours of her face right (except for her nose, but I'm really not sure what to do there, I think her nostrils are too long?) The background colour kind of washes her out, so if you picked another colour that might help as well.

Keep it up! <3 I'm very much liking this so far.
accidentalidentity (edited Nov 12, 2007)
drawn in 19 min
Okay, thank you. I'll add that to the shadows and fix the mouth later. I think I'll add more definition to the hair as well, and the nose needs more tweaking. What color would you suggest for the background?
accidentalidentity (Nov 23, 2007)
drawn in 15 min
Bleh.
accidentalidentity (Nov 23, 2007)
drawn in 3 min
Ergh, I have no idea how to use the text tool.
accidentalidentity (Nov 23, 2007)
drawn in 4 min
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