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fleeting_memory (Oct 22, 2007)
someone's character :)
fleeting_memory (Oct 22, 2007)
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fleeting_memory (Oct 22, 2007)
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fleeting_memory (Oct 23, 2007)
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fleeting_memory (Oct 23, 2007)
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clover_pocky (Oct 23, 2007)
Hey there, I'm really liking your solids, but there's some wonky things with his anatomy. Also, the hand holding his sunglasses is backwards, and it'd be nice if he had another eye. His torso is very long, and very large in comparison with his lower half, and his head very much too big. It'd be nice to see a background as well.

I like it though. :) Your contrast is really good, except on his skin, try using a blend of blue or purple for the shadows, and try to define a definite light source (that's hard!) Throw in a background and this'll pop pretty good. Keep up the good work. <3

<3Jia.
fleeting_memory (Oct 23, 2007)
Good advice-I'll go fix some of those things now-no background though. I hate backgrounds plus a background was not included in the purchase.
fleeting_memory (Oct 23, 2007)
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fleeting_memory (Oct 23, 2007)
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clover_pocky (Oct 25, 2007)
Still have some weird issues with his limbs though. :\

Overall, much better! :) Contrast on the skin helps tons. <3

EngineerErrant (Oct 27, 2007)
Mmmmm...sunglasses...I do this all the time when I'm indoors on a sunny day.
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