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drawn in 47 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
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SANDYclaws
Apprentice
SANDYclaws (Jun 24, 2007)
give me coommmennttss ; o
SANDYclaws (Jun 24, 2007)
drawn in 47 min
deathking (Jun 24, 2007)
She has a really pretty face but its never too good to ask for comments, its better to ask how to fix something if you know something is wrong.
Sweetcell (Jun 24, 2007)
Dk's right, if you ask for comments you won't get them. Your basically saying give me some attention. You won't get it.
As for this though it's nice there's too much color bleeding, especially around the vest, chin and shoulders, and the lineart is sketchy and mismatched. You have thin jagged lines then boom, thick ones. And though the face is nice it needs more shadow (especially the nose) and you can work a bit more on the eye. And if your using the fill, don't. Layers is all you need. Keep working, your getting better every picture.
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