2draw.net - boards - Beginner - GaaraXNaruto Shonen-Ai <Unfinished>

Pieperson (Jan 31, 2007)
drawn in 1 hour 1 min

psychofox0 (Jan 31, 2007)

what, teletubbie yaoi.... what is this world coming to?
I like the pic though.... I enjoy seeing naruto yaoi..XD

Sweetcell (Jan 31, 2007)

Um...... huh. Ooo-k.

You really need to work on proportion. The one on the right needs his chin brought well forward. The back of his head needs to be a touch bigger (add more hair) try to work on his eye to make it look more like a closed eye then an open one, and raise it a bit. His forehead needs to not curve in so much. His ear needs to be pushed back and curved more. When you bring the chin forward the neck needs to come forward as well or else it'll look disjointed. (which will mean his chest comes forward, it'll make the positioning look better too)

The one on the right needs his eye raised, his ear made smaller, his chin a little more pronounced, and the body brought forward as well. _{can't believe i gave tips on that}

Just for those who may have an offence you might consider 13+. We'll see what people think. Take my suggestions as help, not critique please.

Pieperson (edited Feb 3, 2007)

K thanks sweetcell XD
And to psychofox yeah the world is going crazy including me @w@ But I went crazy a looooong time ago Now I'm off to wreck havoc on a muffin village... Byez! I'll probaly finish this tomarrow.

edit: oh yeah and on sweetcells comment the ring around his eye is going to be all black when its finished, it's how Gaara's(guy on the right) eye normaly is. >w<

Pieperson (edited Feb 3, 2007)
drawn in 24 min

Going to do lineart and colours tomarrow

Thanks for the help Sweetcell >w<

Pieperson (Feb 3, 2007)
drawn in 43 min

Will do touch-ups on the lineart later
Got some colours done

Sweetcell (Feb 3, 2007)

Well certainly looks better. I'm going to make a few more suggestions. Lower their chins, their heads look too small and stunted. Gaara on the right still needs his forhead made bigger and not swept in so far, and his neck brought more forward (look at pictures and see where the neck connects to the head chin area.) It should start mid jaw line, sweep in a bit then out where it connects to the chest. You actually have it pretty close on the other guy. But the guy on the left has too thick a neck. If you see where the back of his ear is, that's where the back of the neck should start, it won't look as thick then. And his eye still needs to be raised higher, and make their eyes smaller, right now they're taking too much space on the face.. One more thing,(Gaara's) fingers, remember that the middle finger is longer than the index and ring finger.

Pieperson (Feb 4, 2007)

OK thanks Sweetcell

Pieperson (Feb 5, 2007)
drawn in 18 min

Fix later, Have to go to school

Pieperson (Feb 6, 2007)
drawn in 13 min

>.> Gotta do homework now >.< I'll finish Gaara's chin later and his fingers also

Pieperson (Feb 6, 2007)
drawn in 27 min

Now I've got to eat -.-;;;

cmoon (Mar 3, 2007)

XD nice..... i haven't seen this pairing..... SO COOL!!! *drools*

senshi (Mar 3, 2007)

...wth...seriously.
EVIL

Pieperson (Mar 5, 2007)

I know you would hate me for this senshi XDDDD

Thanks cmoon because I love this couple to death X3

senshi (Mar 5, 2007)

meh...i'll forget it once it leaves my top 5 comments.
I cringe when I see this.

Pieperson (Mar 9, 2007)

>:3
I'm probably gong to finish this soon
Probably >.>

Pieperson (Mar 9, 2007)
drawn in 3 min

>:3

cmoon (Mar 14, 2007)

I LOVE IT TO!!!! everyone around me hates it!!! I LOVES IT!!!! *stares at screen*

Pieperson (Mar 18, 2007)

GAANARU FOREVAH! <3 *gives you a high five*
if you want I can give you links to alot of GaaNaru pictures ^_^