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icybluecub (Aug 9, 2003)
whoa... It really didn't take that long. I was doing a lot of stuff.
This pic, is basically a story i was writing about a fire fairy *however you spell it* and this is her waking up in the morning. her name is aidan. which means one of fire. :) c and c plz!
icybluecub (Aug 9, 2003)
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Turtlebuster (edited Aug 10, 2003)
Beautiful... wonderful colors, also. this sin't a slur on your ability, but i AM getting a little tired of fairies and whatnot. at least you did it well :)
EDIT: well, as for suggestions: the girl's right arm seems a little short. you could either lengthen it a tad OR make the wrist and hand slightly smaller so it looks like her arm is stretching away from the 'camera'. the rocks could be cleaned up a little, and since the sky is so red, it wouldn't hurt to add a little glow to the rocks and the clouds. the clouds could use a little touching up around the edges... the smudging looks nice, but I think you could make the clouds look even nicer if you used a very transparent brush and went over the edges of the clouds. the sky... looks great. it doesn't look natural with those smudge effects, but i like it like that...
icybluecub (edited Aug 10, 2003)
thank you. this was my first fairy. i know they are popping up everywhere, but i had the urge to add something there, figured it was all i could add at the moment.. any suggestions???
edit: sweet! thanks for the tips. i'll fix it up when i dont work. her left arm *the arm on our right* is like behind her head, like stretching. kinda like scratching her head? lol. but thank you!! *hugs*
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