Aww she's cryin... I can't do faces at all, but I think you're on the right track. They seem to need more shadows and highlights to make them flesh out more, though. Some one told me to imagine there is a light bulb up in one corner and to put the highlights where the light would hit and the shadows where it wouldnt reach...they even draw one in on a temporary layer as a reminder. It sounded good to me.. (are you getting cold sweats and heart palpitatations when you are more than 5 feet from this site yet? hehhe)
If I may, the left side of the chin is too small. It should be broader, not sweeping so steeply. It looks deformed right now. And she needs more of a forehead. The eyes need to be a little smaller, the hands a touch too big, and the right side of the neck should be a little more curved and thin. But other than that I think this is great. The colors are nice, the hair's well formed. With a collar that high you wouldn't see a cleavage shadow, but getting along. You need to work more on the shadows and highlights but you learn more as you go.
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