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Fiesta (Aug 9, 2006)
Guess who I am?
Okay all tell you, does the username Fobix ring a bell?
Becuase I am Fobix.X3
I lost the pw,to my email address, and the fobiox account.
My Mom thought she was being helpfull my throwing away pappers on my desk.o_o
Well I think I got better? But,I'm still drawing with the same mouse.
But this girl does have two eyes..xD
Fiesta (Aug 9, 2006)
drawn in 12 min
Fiesta (Aug 9, 2006)
drawn in 10 min
A little disportionate but defiantly my best one so far.
^^
Fiesta (Aug 9, 2006)
drawn in 12 min
Almost done...
Fiesta (Aug 9, 2006)
drawn in 18 min
Fiesta (Aug 9, 2006)
drawn in 15 min
Done. ^^
Ehh move this down if you like.
~Wolf~ (Aug 9, 2006)
Holly crap ur style is good!!!
Fiesta (Aug 9, 2006)
Thank you. ^.^
I think I changed quite a bit from the last time I was here.
wboyer (Aug 9, 2006)
Hnnn... I wouldn't say that this is quite intermediate level yet... First of all, the anatomy of the hands, shoulders, head, and wings is quite off. The fingers of the left hand are all the same size and shape, which doesn't really work... Also, the thumb, if the hand were grasping the fabric in the way that you're trying to depict, wouldn't be so short or turned outwards. Remember that only the fingers of the hand are bent to grasp the skirt, and that the thumb is bent in a different way; it's not supposed to be the same length as the first joint of the other fingers. The arms also could use some work... They don't appear to conform to normal human proportions; rather, they seem a bit lumpy and misshapen in the forearm area (the foream should taper to meet the hand at the wrist), and the left arm's upper extension seems to be too angular, in addition to being in the wrong position (doesn't seem to join the body correctly). I also noticed that the neck joins the body at a very awkward place, or, quite frankly, the wrong place. The neck should be central to the body, as it contains the extension to the spinal column. Also, there usually is a bit of a slant that joins the neck to the shoulders, some muscle that I can't quite name... So there should be quite a bit of distance between the left shoulder and the neck, and equidistance between the two shoulders and the neck... The wings also pose a problem to me... They aren't off at the right angles from the body... Gaah, without a drawing, I can't really explain all of this to you...

The folds of the dress are also irritating. Because they're nonexistent. There would be folds from drawing the dress up with the hands... The shape of the dress is also off, unless there's some kind of underframe in there... The head also poses a bit of a problem, as the hair looks a bit like a wig... It doesn't join the head at a consistent hairline... The nose also seems a bit bulbous; with a bit more shape and shading, it would be much improved... I also noticed that the legs are missing... Lastly, the coloring could use a bit more work, such as being within the lines...

Sorry if I sound a bit bitchy, but you did open yourself up to this by submitting to this board. And I'm also suffering from low blood sugar right now. Anyhow, I hope you take these tips into consideration next time... Keep it up :)
~Wolf~ (Aug 9, 2006)
I have to agree the wings are at a weird angle.
DrsFan (Aug 9, 2006)
Wow, Bethany I knew all the weeks of bugging you, you would finnally give in and draw a picture! Nice one!!
dietsoda (Aug 9, 2006)
Nice choice of colors. Mhhmmmm!
Fiesta (Aug 19, 2006)
Thank you!
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