Oh wow. I love the variable thickness of the lines you used! The only thing that bugs me a bit is the mouth area... Maybe take a bit of the thicknes from the top outer edge of the lower lip in order to create definition between the upper and lower lip... If that makes any sense :P Cool beans so far :D
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Your guy on the Hunter picture looks good, hope to see it finished. Remember to memo me when you are.