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keikai (Apr 19, 2006)

It's a horrible attempt at giftart for my friend who's character is a...erm =/ mate?....for my roleplay character. The were recently seperated for a while so I just made this. Critique would be (and is) greatly appreciated.

keikai (Apr 19, 2006)
drawn in 2 hours 20 min

Sweetcell (Apr 19, 2006)

It's very good, just make the tears a little softer and lighter, otherwise I think it's fine.

keikai (Apr 20, 2006)

Softer/lighter tears, got it. I agree, the tears were sort of just slapped on. Thanks for the comment! I'll see what I can do.

keikai (Apr 21, 2006)
drawn in 3 min

I hope this looks better even a little bit. Do you you think the tears look 'softer' now? If not suggestions are great. Thanks for the advice before x3!

Sweetcell (Apr 22, 2006)

Yes, that's better. Keep it up keikai.