I think this would look nicer if you either didn't use airbrush for the colouring, or if the outline wasn't all pixel like. It's quite a nice drawing really, but the colouring and outline don't really match, if you know what I mean. Just a suggestion though ^^
Ya I know what you mean. When I first started here (on an old username) I used to do stuff like this all the time, because I wasn't really sure what to do or anything and I wanted to try alot of different things.
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But thank you for the advice, I'll try something else next time.
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