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DieChan (Mar 10, 2006)

Not hidden because I need some constructive criticism for the (semi) manly anatomy. Just don't flame the picture, and also take my styl into consideration (i.e. the arm length. I always draw long arms/legs.)

DieChan (Mar 10, 2006)
drawn in 1 hour 5 min

Roka (Mar 10, 2006)

His Tummy looks sorta Chubby :3 Otherwise its nice ?

fleeting_memory (Mar 10, 2006)

well if you always draw long appendages then this fits into your style because his arm is noticably too long. Of anything to fix I must admit the hand looks too big to me-if its supposed to be in the fore-ground then you may want to rotate the arm toward the viewer more because it looks like his arm is just out to the side.
Nice line art and his stomach looks pretty good.

DieChan (Mar 11, 2006)
drawn in 8 min

DieChan (Mar 11, 2006)
drawn in 2 min

Took fleeting_memory's advice and tried to put the arm more into the foreground. :\ Man, this lineart is fun.

sephiroth54321 (Mar 11, 2006)

The right arm isn't too long, i think the left shoulder just looks a bit odd, try making the lower half of the curve "come out" more.

SanzoGirl (Mar 14, 2006)

I think it's really good, but the forearm isn't long enough. :P

DieChan (Aug 27, 2006)
drawn in 9 min

As done as it's getting. x_x