Love the hair, great start, though I think maybe her eye could be set a tad farther back.. or maybe be a bit smaller.. hard to tell XD either way, very nice!
I think the eye is in the right place.. just needs to be smaller. Other than that I really think that this is turning out very well^^ I'm loving the shape of the face and the hair :)
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