it's a victim of embossed shading. Perhaps if you made your hilights/shadows less uniform/flat, it'd help give the effect you want.
For example, rather than putting dark on one side, and light on the other side, mix and match (which you sort of begam to do in some places, like the neck, but not enough).

Whoa.... The picture looks as if you already knew the outcome.....looking at a downward angle .... with a look of dissapointment.....as if the picrure itelf is saying "It feels like this took forever...all that meticulous shading and lineart editing....and still...it looks...like crap."
Creeepy